Odd start to a story but I like it, keep going.

Ha Ha. That was an awesome start. Update both of your stories soon please. If Yassen survived how come K-Unit knows and not Alex? I love this one already but am a bit confused with the scientists: you need to define them more, give them names, suptely while their talking to eachother and have one of them slip. or something. Update Soon!

Yay! It has all of my favorite characters in it! Please update soon! *puppy eyes*

Raven

loved it up date soon!

Oh! I LOVE IT! it's so brillinant! I just can't wait for the next chapter! PLEASE PUT IT UP AS FAST AS YOU CAN!

Just one thing: Yassen doesn't have RED hair. He's described like this on (w)alexridercom:

Blond, close-cropped hair with a smooth face. Body of a dancer with clear, hard blue eyes. Pale, expressionless face with almost feminine eyelashes and chiselled lips.

So... there you got it... just a little reminder...

/Illusjon

Hey, this sounds like a really great beginning to the fic! I'm quite intrigued now to find out what happens next. Who these people are and what they want, etc...

As to mistakes, I did notice some spelling mistakes, places where you seemed to have the wrong word but I think it was just a spelling thing - you know, when the spell checker puts the wrong word in. Anyway, the main section I noticed was when the 'bad guy' was using the computer.

I'd find them for you, but it's late and I need to sleep...

Looking forward to reading more from you.

-Rose.

(if you're worried about mistakes, I'd suggest getting a beta-reader. If you can't find anyone let me know - I'd be happy to read through things for you, but I'm rather busy at the moment, so don't know how much free time I'd have for it).

That was really good! I especially liked the end when YASSEN said that he thought something was FUNNY! As you might be able to tell from the caps, that surprised me. It was great. :D

Um...there are a few typos, like "fericly", but I didn't see too many mistakes. Great job, and hurry up and update both this and Choice is a Misconception!

Well it's an awesome plotline, love the way that they reacted to Yassen *grins*

One hting I noticed is that you wrote M 16 instead of M I6, it's a common mistake I've seen in other fics, but M 16 is actually a type of gun, while M I6 is the spy agency. Just like to point that out

But I love this and I cannot wait for the next chapter! I can't wait for an update on Choice is A Misconception either :D

-Destinystar

Nice, exciting story. I can't wait for more! _