Reviews for Faint Hearted |
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![]() ![]() Near the beginning of the chapter, Alex says, "Our capturers got too cocky as time passed". Capturers is not a word; I think you mean captors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked that Alex rescued them |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, nice ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() This was awesome! :) |
![]() ![]() Wow! This ff was amazing plz write more |
![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story, especially the ending. Subtle, calming, and most of all, pleasing. You greatly portrayed the characters feelings, and I loved what you did for O' thy legendary sighting of Yassen. I feel like this comment will go unheard, since it was finished in 2012. But, I just have to tell you, Keep going! You made me cry a bit...as I'm guessing many others would have done. I'm smiling heavenly right now, just to let you know...and just a bit tears eyed still. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gyg |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3 Nathan/Alex 5ever or Band of Deadly Dads Yassen 5ever This was great. |
![]() ![]() This was amazing! You got a lot near the end of the story and that's awesome! I'll love reading your other stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant :D I loved this and literally could not put it down ... All. Day. And. Night! |
![]() ![]() This story is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUDE I LOVED THIS STORY YOU COULD BE ANTHONY HOROWITZ IN DISGUISE PMT HOW DID YOU ya know what just keep writing you. No matter what anyone else says as long as you want to you write you're butt off cause you are GOOD at it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love It! |
![]() ![]() My name is Avery. I keep forgetting that it's a unisex name. |