Great job! I loved this! Especially awesome the way you included Yassen, K-unit and Alex all into one epic story! Stories with a larger 'cast' of characters can be hard to write, but you did a great job including every character's thoughts and it was a great plot!
There's not enough stories with all K-unit, Yassen and Alex in them, and I think you wrote it really well. :)

This was SUCH a good story! This is like, my all time favorite fanfic of Alex Rider! I'm so glad that you continued to write this for four years, I mean, THAT takes some serious dedication. Anyway, LOVED all of it, when I first saw it I never thought I'd finish it, but I found myself becoming addicted, so I had to continue. So... THANK YOU!

Hi I was so excited to see this fic updated!

I've been reading it for a long time, and was so happy when I saw a bulk of updates waiting for me in my inbox. I've really enjoyed this fic. You're writing is great and the story was just fantastc!

Absolutely loved reading this, its so well written :D I read the whole thing in three days so I am very proud of myself ;) Im gonna go have a look at your other stories now!

Hey so I know this story was written over a year ago, but I have only just found it. I came across it yesterday and haven't stopped reading it since, I love it!
There was just one little mistake in this chapter which bugged me - when it says 'Even if he had managed to crawl into a hospital, there would have been no way to pay for their care'. I don't know if you will change it or not but i thought I would point out that here in England, healthcare in hospitals is free :D
But that is the only thing I have found wrong with this story and Im on chapter 24 ahaha. when I have finished this one I will definitely be reading some of you other stories as this is really well written
Quite a long review but Im sure you won't mind ;)

Wow, I loved it. Smiling through tears at the bittersweet ending :)

This chapter made me smile. And I swear, during the comment about pink and blue flamingoes? I lost it. I laughed so hard, my sister thought I was going crazy. This is just such a great story, and... I don't know, it was awesome. The best part, though? You finished it. It's awesome and it's the worst thing ever at the same time. I really hate the fact that it's done, but I'd much rather it than if you abandoned this midway. So, yeah. Thank you for writing and finishing this story. I'm still smiling, because Alex has been through so much and he's still going strong and I can't stop thinking about it and- (takesadeepbreath) Okay, calming down now.

In any case, this thing was so wonderful it pretty much knocked me off my feet. Could hardly stop reading once I started. Excellent length. Oh, and I love Yassen 's appearance in this entire story in general, but especially that last bit with the postcard.

Again, thanks for this story! I think this is the longest review I've ever written so far... Doesn't matter, I'm way too giddy to care right now. Keep up the good work!

Aww, this story had me both crying and smiling. Brilliantly written!

I like the interactions.

poor alex...

Nice

Its AMAZING! I'm glad none of them died!

I was just wondering: did the hand that had nerve damage heal?

D: It's over? Awww...
(Although you should try putting up that "Complete" tag, the one you can find at "Manage Stories" by clicking on the title; I was expecting another chapter :((((((()
But oh well! Great story, although it's been a while since I've read it in it's entirety. I'll need to readdress that soon. Hope to see more Alex Rider stories from you in the future.
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This is a terrible experiment! First, the unsanitary environment will totally affect the outcome. Second, it's not a constant either. The first victim had a clean environment while the rest got it when it was even dirtier. Also, are they even keeping the same type of person constant? It doesn't seem like it.

Stupid scientists don't know how to do their job.