Reviews for Applesin
darkorangecat chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
WOW! Wonderfully, spectacularly written. I love the sensory input and especially enjoyed the following phrase: "... palm in a puddle of citrus...". The sounds of the words work so well together.
IlovetowriteSMP chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Very well written.
medusaasaphoenix chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
it tickles me that jason's expression is vaguely disgusted/annoyed/blank. i can completely picture it. fabulous story.
Average Everyday Sane Psycho chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
another amazing spixie fic
MercuryMan chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
"Seriously, not in my kitchen."

Haha! Classic! I really enjoyed this, thanks!
fireflower314 chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
So this is pretty much my favorite new piece of fanfiction. I love how you write it- reading it, I really could feel the humidity and heavy air along with them. You also put in Spinelli's thought/conversation process really well. Even if you didn't write down exactly what he was saying, I could definitely imagine it in my head. And of course Stone Cold's entrance at the end was awesome- or should I follow Kate's vocabulary advice from yesterday and say exquisite? Great job!
SEEKER-2000 chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
HOT.

OMG.

YOU. FOR THE WIN.

Im going to go reread this.