Reviews for Suffering
Nikaru12 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
noooooo, why?
because they died?
this is so sad
sakuuya chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Yeah, old story is old; I'm reviewing as part of an effort to review every horror story in this category. Seriously.

And oh, Saba, are the early TMM horror fics bad! This fic left me lukewarm, but just reading a story by someone with decent grammar is a breath of fresh air, believe me.

The reason I'm not too hot on this fic, I think, is because you spend a lot of time on how sad everybody is about Ichigo, rather than focusing on the fractured relationship between Kish and Pai that is, in my opinion, the most interesting thing in the story. Kish, in particular, is so busy feeling sad about Ichigo that he doesn't have time to feel betrayed by his friend, and I think that hurts the story as a whole. I mean, don't get me wrong, this isn't bad, but I would have liked, say, a fight scene between Kish and Pai where they'd get a chance to air out their issues.
Ayuhime -or Ame-chan chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
─░YEEEE! *screams* (oh,and,why its ening seemed me as romeo and juliet? is that just me?)
Onineko Hikari-chan chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
easternrose21 chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Aww, so sad

Anway you would be able to talk to me on my fourms?
Summer-san chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
*sniff* *sniff* even though *sniff* I don't like Ichigo-san *sniff* that much...that was so sweet! The pain Kisshu felt especially * sniff* priceless and Pai played a great role *sniff* you know that word *sniff* teleport? *sniff* I forgot to use *sniff* it in my *sniff* story so instead *sniff, grabs tissue* I put 'zapped' lol *sniff*
VixenVariety chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
what does aishiteru mean
RavenousMax chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Pai is so coldhearted!

Update soon kay?
Tomoyo Kinomoto chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
*stunned* Now THIS is an amazing story!
KittyKooneko chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
AW! that was SO sad Por Ichigo and Kish. Mean PAI!
Mew-Sahara chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
How horribly sad! *sobs in a dark corner*

The evil Pai part and Kisshu dying was what got me tearing up. So sad... ;-;
Tuliharja chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
This was really sad story. And I loved every bit for it! It just suited so perefectly...
ILoveMCR95 chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
The Ambiguous Case chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
O.O Ok, this is like, the BEST story you've written! So FAR... -

Sometimes i wonder how people write so good...