Reviews for Prompted Oneshots
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 5 . 5/27/2008
aww what Mhera wrote down was so sweet

can't wait to read more

update soon
KolaByNikola chapter 5 . 5/27/2008
I apologize for not reviewing sooner.. I thoroughly enjoyed chapters 4 and 5, especially 4. Great details :D
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 5 . 5/26/2008
So, Mhera thinks that Keimo blames Marik for all of this... now I'm curious as to what Marik actually did that made Keimo blame him...

Great work!
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 4 . 5/25/2008
omg i wanted to cry!that is so sad but its sweet that he still cares about her..i still wanna cry -.-

can't wait to read another

update soon
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 4 . 5/24/2008
Oh, this was a powerful story! Poor Marik...

I love the picture of the seven year oak tree; and the flower with the ring reminds me of "Phantom"!

And I like the mention of how Marik said he didn't want to blame anyone for what happened, and how he would "be no better than someone he once knew" if he did so. (Is he referring to his father?)

Great work on this powerful story!
christianqueenofegypt chapter 3 . 5/13/2008
Wow, i didn't know Marik Ishtar of all people could be so romantic - I still like Shadi/Ishizu pairing though. lol

Marik: :) say you'll share with me one love one lifetime

Lead me, save me from my solitude

Say you want me here to stay beside you

Filiron... that's all I ask o...

THUNK* filiron grins and takles him and they start frenching. -

Keep going!
christianqueenofegypt chapter 2 . 5/13/2008
WOW! this is REALLY GOOD! It's like a poem/story form! can't wait to read the next Chappie! -
KolaByNikola chapter 3 . 5/13/2008
Really, I don't think I could dislike anything you write.

Wonderful descriptions :)
KolaByNikola chapter 2 . 5/13/2008
I think you are getting toward the roots of their feeling in these oneshots. It is like Marik to be so proud as to want to see all of his offspring share the traits that make him him, and yet want to see the love of his life reflected in his children's faces as well.

Not too short, don't worry about length.

KolaByNikola chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Ooh, I like this one very much. I'm such a hopeless romantic, it kills me. But I do love how sweetly he proposes. (insert girly-dreamy sigh here)

Brilliant :)
GlimerOfhope chapter 3 . 5/11/2008
So this marik intended?
GlimerOfhope chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
good start, intiguing though the main characters are oc and your style has neatly improved in this one
Chi Yagami chapter 3 . 5/6/2008
_ adorable... I think you described the emotions fine D a very sweet chapter!
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 3 . 5/3/2008
Oh, this one was adorable! And I think there were a couple Phantom references in this one, particularly with Marik leading Filiron through the passageways...

I also liked all of the desert analogies; that really brought everything together!

Great work!
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 3 . 5/3/2008
AWW!thats so sweet!its cute how Marik has a sweet side and how he loves her!

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