Reviews for Prompted Oneshots
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 35 . 12/17/2009
I find it interesting that they used red ink...

And is this Rare Hunter Marik or Repented Marik? Because I'm seeing signs of both, which makes for a very interesting twist...
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 35 . 12/14/2009
yay you updated D

i like the way you write

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
searing light dragon chapter 35 . 12/13/2009
Good chapter as usual
Rugrat247 chapter 35 . 12/13/2009
I love the thought you put into this. I'd never think up the hidden code, for lack of better words, that accomplishes the same thing as the twenty seven cards had. Nice job.

Your daddy Marik is so cute. SQUEE! 3 I wanna glomp them both.

He made his way toward the door, avoiding his usual tripping over the stairs, to my surprise. GOLD.

And oh my gosh. I just LOVED that last line. Makes you think. It was just... so cute? Yes, cute? Makes me wanna cry though. Poor PR Marik. :(

Great shot. Well worth the wait. 3
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 34 . 10/7/2009
The descriptions are wonderful, as always. But poor Marik, feeling guilty about what happened. Well, he was in the wrong, but... yay for repented Marik!
Nuit Songeur chapter 33 . 10/6/2009
I find this quite insightful. At the beginning while he's musing over the differentiations between himself and the R.H., I distinctively thought about L from Death Note for some reason- just the way he thinks things through so calculatingly.

From this phrase- "after solitude had let me loose of its melancholy hold" I was reminded of the Phantom and how he desired Christine to save him from his solitude.

I also enjoyed the ending where the one entity that could finally bring him to some form of remorse was the memory of his late bride. I found it interesting how much effect she had on him. And also how at the very end, he dismissed feeling remorseful because he had to focus on the present course. A typical male, if I do say so myself.

sherabo chapter 34 . 10/6/2009
Your work is almost spiritual, well worthe the wait. Hope you're enjoying college...
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 34 . 10/5/2009
yay!your alive :D

poor you being a collage freshman

this was so sweet and...funny when Marik almost triped XD

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Rugrat247 chapter 34 . 10/4/2009
Hooray for updating!

I love this part: I paled as I saw an all too familiar smirk meet my eyes.

So. . . many. . . POTO refs. . . !

Great job! :)
searing light dragon chapter 34 . 10/4/2009
Great chapter. Glad to see an update again for this.
Rugrat247 chapter 33 . 7/25/2009
Firstly, sorry for the late review. For some reason, I can't review on my laptop at the moment. I can't update on it or anything either. I think I did something to mess it up, so I'll tell you when I've fixed it. D:

Anyway, I LOVE how he painted Filiron. That's just so cute. I love Jewelshipping. It's too cute!

The dream was great. I'd be upset, too, if I was Filiron. XD Bad Marik, bad!

Great chapter! Loved it!

PS. BACON and eggs for breakfast tomorrow - if you never hear from me again, you'll know why. LOL! XD
searing light dragon chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
Great chapter.
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
aww Marik painted a portrait..that was so sweet...and sad when he imagined her..

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
Aww, poor Marik...

But I love the thought of him painting a portrait, though. Something you wouldn't really expect from him. X3

But him imagining what she would say... so sad...
sherabo chapter 32 . 6/26/2009
I ENJOYED THIS VERY MUCH. It shows that sometimes we are tough to judge, its good unquestional love is hovering around.
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