Reviews for Prompted Oneshots
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 34 . 10/7/2009
The descriptions are wonderful, as always. But poor Marik, feeling guilty about what happened. Well, he was in the wrong, but... yay for repented Marik!
Nuit Songeur chapter 33 . 10/6/2009
I find this quite insightful. At the beginning while he's musing over the differentiations between himself and the R.H., I distinctively thought about L from Death Note for some reason- just the way he thinks things through so calculatingly.

From this phrase- "after solitude had let me loose of its melancholy hold" I was reminded of the Phantom and how he desired Christine to save him from his solitude.

I also enjoyed the ending where the one entity that could finally bring him to some form of remorse was the memory of his late bride. I found it interesting how much effect she had on him. And also how at the very end, he dismissed feeling remorseful because he had to focus on the present course. A typical male, if I do say so myself.

-NuitSongeur
sherabo chapter 34 . 10/6/2009
Your work is almost spiritual, well worthe the wait. Hope you're enjoying college...
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 34 . 10/5/2009
yay!your alive :D

poor you being a collage freshman

this was so sweet and...funny when Marik almost triped XD

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Rugrat247 chapter 34 . 10/4/2009
Hooray for updating!

I love this part: I paled as I saw an all too familiar smirk meet my eyes.

So. . . many. . . POTO refs. . . !

Great job! :)
searing light dragon chapter 34 . 10/4/2009
Great chapter. Glad to see an update again for this.
Rugrat247 chapter 33 . 7/25/2009
Firstly, sorry for the late review. For some reason, I can't review on my laptop at the moment. I can't update on it or anything either. I think I did something to mess it up, so I'll tell you when I've fixed it. D:

Anyway, I LOVE how he painted Filiron. That's just so cute. I love Jewelshipping. It's too cute!

The dream was great. I'd be upset, too, if I was Filiron. XD Bad Marik, bad!

Great chapter! Loved it!

PS. BACON and eggs for breakfast tomorrow - if you never hear from me again, you'll know why. LOL! XD
searing light dragon chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
Great chapter.
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
aww Marik painted a portrait..that was so sweet...and sad when he imagined her..

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
Aww, poor Marik...

But I love the thought of him painting a portrait, though. Something you wouldn't really expect from him. X3

But him imagining what she would say... so sad...
sherabo chapter 32 . 6/26/2009
I ENJOYED THIS VERY MUCH. It shows that sometimes we are tough to judge, its good unquestional love is hovering around.
searing light dragon chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Great chapter.
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Aww, poor Marik. But I love how Mhera makes him feel better about the whole ordeal.

And LOL at him not being aware that Odion and Ishizu are coming! I loved that part. XD
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
aww that was adorable! XD

i loved the way you ended it

can't wait to read another one

update soon :D
Rugrat247 chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Aww! SO CUTE! Here father's day is in September. Stange... o.O

I still love this bit in particular: Marik sputtered. “You were in fights? Why did I not know about this?”

The father's day gift and everything was awesome. I just love how you used the "being prepared for anything" in the ending. _

Great job! Thank you SO much!
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