Reviews for Prompted Oneshots
searing light dragon chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Great chapter.
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Aww, poor Marik. But I love how Mhera makes him feel better about the whole ordeal.

And LOL at him not being aware that Odion and Ishizu are coming! I loved that part. XD
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
aww that was adorable! XD

i loved the way you ended it

can't wait to read another one

update soon :D
Rugrat247 chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Aww! SO CUTE! Here father's day is in September. Stange... o.O

I still love this bit in particular: Marik sputtered. “You were in fights? Why did I not know about this?”

The father's day gift and everything was awesome. I just love how you used the "being prepared for anything" in the ending. _

Great job! Thank you SO much!
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 31 . 6/4/2009
...well..he's confident...nice to know what he's thinking XD

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Nuit Songeur chapter 31 . 6/4/2009
Ee.. .ee...

**fingers twitching on keyboard**

Well, we all know Marik is going to win. Unless the authoress decides to pull some miraculous stunt which- given her favor of the sadistic characters I doubt that will happen. Ha, ha. :P (I kid, I kid)

It's certainly a nice break through Marik's perspective. He certainly knows what he's doing- I'll give him that. I just don't like it but... like, the authoress, I do like it. Delightfully deceptive little bugger.

I like how you start it out with a contemplation on discipline and then keep that theme throughout. **looks at chapter title** Well, that explains why.

And! I sniffed out a POTO reference- "I'd hate to have to cut the fun short"? Yeah, you thought you were going to let that one get away from me, did you? Ha! (Okay, so I haven't really proven anything)

So, a very nice snippet that makes me anxious to read the fuel you have coming up.

-NuitSongeu (not logged in)
Rugrat247 chapter 31 . 6/3/2009
Haha. Maniacal laughter!

*uses can of butt whoop on Marik...then plays "the tape"* XD

Poor Mheralo. Why, Marik? WHY! Rhetorical question...he's Mr Manipulative. That's why! XD

Good oneshot. I know I've said this a million times, but I'm really looking forward/dreading the final chapter of PR. :3
searing light dragon chapter 31 . 6/3/2009
Good chapter.
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 31 . 6/3/2009
Looking into Marik's mind is always interesting, but more so when his dark side is trying to rationalize things.

And of course... he's always confident...
Rugrat247 chapter 30 . 5/4/2009
Nice job. The sunrise bit was a nice touch.

The POTO reference is how he tied the wedding band onto the lily with the purple ribbon, like Erik with the black ribbon, ring and rose, right?
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 30 . 5/3/2009
aww so adorable and yet so sad

and i'm still wondering how Filiron died

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
searing light dragon chapter 30 . 5/2/2009
Good chapter
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 30 . 5/2/2009
I love the look into Marik's mind and seeing his description of things.

And ooh, the whole thing is so bittersweet...
journey maker chapter 30 . 5/2/2009
I loved this one..Please update when you can..
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 29 . 4/26/2009
aaw its soo cute to see what Sheon thinks of Mhera :D

can't wait to read another one

update soon :D
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