Reviews for Prompted Oneshots
Rugrat247 chapter 33 . 7/25/2009
Firstly, sorry for the late review. For some reason, I can't review on my laptop at the moment. I can't update on it or anything either. I think I did something to mess it up, so I'll tell you when I've fixed it. D:

Anyway, I LOVE how he painted Filiron. That's just so cute. I love Jewelshipping. It's too cute!

The dream was great. I'd be upset, too, if I was Filiron. XD Bad Marik, bad!

Great chapter! Loved it!

PS. BACON and eggs for breakfast tomorrow - if you never hear from me again, you'll know why. LOL! XD
searing light dragon chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
Great chapter.
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
aww Marik painted a portrait..that was so sweet...and sad when he imagined her..

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 33 . 7/22/2009
Aww, poor Marik...

But I love the thought of him painting a portrait, though. Something you wouldn't really expect from him. X3

But him imagining what she would say... so sad...
sherabo chapter 32 . 6/26/2009
I ENJOYED THIS VERY MUCH. It shows that sometimes we are tough to judge, its good unquestional love is hovering around.
searing light dragon chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Great chapter.
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Aww, poor Marik. But I love how Mhera makes him feel better about the whole ordeal.

And LOL at him not being aware that Odion and Ishizu are coming! I loved that part. XD
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
aww that was adorable! XD

i loved the way you ended it

can't wait to read another one

update soon :D
Rugrat247 chapter 32 . 6/23/2009
Aww! SO CUTE! Here father's day is in September. Stange... o.O

I still love this bit in particular: Marik sputtered. “You were in fights? Why did I not know about this?”

The father's day gift and everything was awesome. I just love how you used the "being prepared for anything" in the ending. _

Great job! Thank you SO much!
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 31 . 6/4/2009
...well..he's confident...nice to know what he's thinking XD

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Nuit Songeur chapter 31 . 6/4/2009
Ee.. ...ee...ee.. .ee...

**fingers twitching on keyboard**

Well, we all know Marik is going to win. Unless the authoress decides to pull some miraculous stunt which- given her favor of the sadistic characters I doubt that will happen. Ha, ha. :P (I kid, I kid)

It's certainly a nice break through Marik's perspective. He certainly knows what he's doing- I'll give him that. I just don't like it but... like, the authoress, I do like it. Delightfully deceptive little bugger.

I like how you start it out with a contemplation on discipline and then keep that theme throughout. **looks at chapter title** Well, that explains why.

And! I sniffed out a POTO reference- "I'd hate to have to cut the fun short"? Yeah, you thought you were going to let that one get away from me, did you? Ha! (Okay, so I haven't really proven anything)

So, a very nice snippet that makes me anxious to read the fuel you have coming up.

-NuitSongeu (not logged in)
Rugrat247 chapter 31 . 6/3/2009
Haha. Maniacal laughter!

*uses can of butt whoop on Marik...then plays "the tape"* XD

Poor Mheralo. Why, Marik? WHY! Rhetorical question...he's Mr Manipulative. That's why! XD

Good oneshot. I know I've said this a million times, but I'm really looking forward/dreading the final chapter of PR. :3
searing light dragon chapter 31 . 6/3/2009
Good chapter.
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 31 . 6/3/2009
Looking into Marik's mind is always interesting, but more so when his dark side is trying to rationalize things.

And of course... he's always confident...
Rugrat247 chapter 30 . 5/4/2009
Nice job. The sunrise bit was a nice touch.

The POTO reference is how he tied the wedding band onto the lily with the purple ribbon, like Erik with the black ribbon, ring and rose, right?
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