|Reviews for The Fall|
| peyote-angels chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Wow this totally just killed me. That's so Ryan. And it's so perfect.
| Solo Ensemble chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
Aw, yay. I love strong!Kelly.
| BlindHuntress chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
That's so good! I'm so glad that someone didn't have Kelly falling over herself to get back with Ryan; she's a little airheaded, but not stupid.
| AedhgsH chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Only three reviews? Seriously?
I love this story. Even if Ryan is a jerk half of the time, I am still drawn to his character and his relationship with Kelly. This story gave his character more depth. Great job and I hope to read more from you.
| Clio195 chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
aww, poor ryan. this was really awesome, i loved the way you wrote it. it's the way you put in you... you...(i forget what that's called.) :) great job!
| ktface3 chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I liked this a lot. I think all the stuff about high school was very plausible for him; especially now that we see him trying really hard to be a big-shot. And his hopelessness was very real in this. I think the fact that you wrote in second-person helped that a lot. Great job!
| hanakinstarbuck chapter 1 . 4/25/2008
YES! So great. This needs to happen for reals.
I loved it so much. Poor Ryan. It's only a matter of time...