Reviews for If I Should Fall
saturn567 chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
beautiful job!
LaFilmeMichelle chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
o, i liked it, as always. good talk. hm..is she gonna pay for the little girl and her dad? can't wait for the next!
Braelyn Rae chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
I don't think this was totally OOC at all, in fact, it was fantastic. Can't wait for more!
space77 chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
Great chapter... loved Bren's talk with Clara and Ange's talk with Booth. Great touches!

Keep going!

~Space
Different Child chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
Aw, love it! Amazing! Really. I liked seeing Brennan bond with Clara. Poor kid, I hope she gets to read Bren's next book. I am curious though, what happened that night with Sweets? You never told us more of it. Like what happened on that 'long night'. Lol. Awesome though!
EliH2 chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
Brilliant as usaul! You should totally have Brennan give that little girl an advance copy of her book. This story is like totally amazing... have I already said that? Anyway, keep up the good work, update soon, and... *can't think of anything else to say* yeah!
Aching Bones chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
Hi there,

Just loved this chapter, it was so full of everything emotional...I can not wait for you to update again...

Bones is so clinical towards her cancer...she takes everything her doctors say and accepts it with the medical knowledge and scientific brain that she has...we need to get more "feeling" from her and I hope that this experience for her will eventually throw some light in that direction for her...I know she feels and doubts just like everyone else but she hides it so well, too well...someone needs to break that barrier in her and sometime soon...

Found the whole hospital experience this time very emotional both for Bones and also for that little girl, Clara...that was just so sad...how she had accepted her faith so well, it was almost wrong...almost I say because I know all that she has been through before she got to that point...it was a long process. Could not help but see the significance of when she said that her mother had done a runner when she was born because she had not wanted to have kids in the first place, how the idea had scared her...would this, somewhere in Bones, strike a cord with her not wanting to have kids herself and her reasons for that...

Thought that Booth and Angela frantically looking for Bones when they realised she was not in her room was lovely...I know she worried them and that they both care for her so much...but I was glad that they accepted her reasons without challenge...she worried them on the way out too, at how weak that she was...loved the idea of Booth suggesting to carry her and having to opt for a wheelchair in the end...

Loved the conversation between Booth and Angela at Hodgins house...it was just so sweet and full of emotion for both of them...Angela is so honest and Booth is not with his feelings towards Bones...Angela is right, he loves what he has with Bones, a very successful partnership and friendship and he does not want to risk losing it...but he could lose it in the blink of an eye and then there would be so many regrets...I wonder did what Angela say get through or is he just going to be as stubborn about it as usual...I hope not...

Looking forward very much to your update...

Ger
notmagnificent chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
Aw. Angela always gives the best heart-to-hearts, no? And let's see more of Clara. I like her.

Thanks for updating! Please do it again soon!
squeekie23 chapter 17 . 6/5/2008
I didn't think that was out of character at all. I love all the dialog, now we just need more talking between BB!
Hazmatt chapter 17 . 6/4/2008
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope Bones gets better! Poor Clara! I hope that "terminal" won't actually mean terminal in this story, and that she'll go into sudden remission! Please? I also hope that Bones and Booth grasp the opportunity that is presented to them, to take a chance on love actually working out! I can't wait to read more!
freudianslip87 chapter 17 . 6/4/2008
Nice chapter. I liked the part with Brennan meeting the little girl who liked her books. And Angela and Booth's conversation made me laugh.

Can't wait for the next one!
UberPest chapter 17 . 6/4/2008
I think, especially given the situation you've put them in, you have the characters spot on.
Chicklit chapter 17 . 6/4/2008
I didn't think it was OOC at all - Angela and Booth were very much in character, and Brennan's interaction with her young reader was a nice counterpoint.
HawkAngel XD chapter 17 . 6/4/2008
wonderful... and it wasn't OOC... it was perfect... great conversation there... and of course, great in all the aspects... update soon please

HawkAngel
Ash211230 chapter 17 . 6/4/2008
AWW! Ifelt bad for the little girl. Maybe when Brennan gets better she can try to help her.

I think Angela is right, this whole thing should open Brennan and Booth's eyes about how at any moment things can drasticly change. At the begining of this story where she was going to have the surgery they had a very emotional conection and I hope they can fingd their way back to it when she gets better. Great chapter. Please post soon!

~Ash
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