|Reviews for Darkness|
| JustAnotherGirlInTheWorld chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Wow, this is absolutely wonderful. Great job! I especially love the last line!
| Gilbert Winchester chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
This was so in-character and believable that it honestly could have been in the novel itself. Beautiful job :)
| Ayuki Ame chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
That was very in-character xD As
1) I still found Ralph very annoying
2) Jack I still admire
3) Roger is Roger xD
| Yuti-Chan chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Brilliant and very intense!
| ClayCelloFire chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
I like this, the characters stay in character
| ChibiYuugiKoibito chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Oh wow! I really like the concept, very original! And I love the language you use as well XD. KEEP ON WRITING!
| Lilaxx002 chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Woa, deep. Not alot about Simon here, I must say, but that's okay. Very nice about how Jack gives back the glasses, but Ralph's still pissed. Very well written too. :)