|Reviews for the light collected|
| Nijello chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
...*SOB!* SO, FREAKING, BEAUTIFUL! WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
| Karichi chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
O_O aw -cries- that so sad! especialy the kiss part . i luv it _
| shoxxic chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I love the identity crisis here- did you read barth anderson's "the magician and the fool"? the mirror concept sort of reminded me of that.
but I digress: I love this prose, especially this one line (you have a way with words):
"He killed with his smile - his warm eyes and his gentle words that caressed. He killed with his fangs - his glare and his biting curses, burning with hostility."
oh yeah & I caught one typo:
"It's an identity crisis, the unspoken question lingering in the air as the boy leans foreword"
foreword should be "forward".
| J Plash chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Brilliant. My only criticism would be that it doesn't end well - you need another sentence on there. The one you used to end the summary (he only exists on the other side of the mirror-his skin is cold like glass) would work well. At the moment there's a big gap there where it doesn't end.
That aside, fantastic writing. You don't often stumble across writing of this caliber in this style being used in fic (particularly Air Gear fic :P). Awesome work.
Off to check out anything else you've written... ;D
| Etsuuko chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
| Flareons chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Shit. This was really, really well done. Definitely a favourite.