Reviews for Shattered
Lacy-Jane chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
Brilliant story!
Sophia chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
Nice one, finally something realistic (okay if vampires can be real), yes Edward is ... only human, and can loose his temper.

I like the way you write, it flows very naturally whith the thoughts of the characters.
BellaMarie310 chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
i really liked this story :)
Sophia24 chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
aw...poor Edward. this is really good writing and it certainly conveys how much pain edward is feeling.
be minee x chapter 2 . 5/16/2009
(: good story.
skye24135 chapter 2 . 5/15/2009
Aw... That's so sweet Edward feels bad for hurting Bella.
ASHLEYYYBLACKBERRYYY chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
that sux its just a 2 shot but yeah idk where it would go. great writing :)
ASHLEYYYBLACKBERRYYY chapter 2 . 5/4/2009
that was so sad! :( i feel so bad for edward..and bella..ow! are you going to keep writing this story? i hope you do..and if so, update soon!
RingTheBella chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
Finding the ring on the bed was a nice touch.

Gotta say I'm surprised that she never said the words "I forgive you"

but over all I really liked it and I am going to suggest it to friends

you know what would make a good chapter 3... the day the cast gets removed... hint hint :)
Jenna chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
i really like this. its written very well. i hope you keep going.
xoSmiley4Lifexo chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
oh! that was beautiful! i loved it with all my heart and soul! it was amazing and i am DEF. putting to my faves! you rock my fuzzy red socks off! LOVE YA LOTS!


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xoSmiley4Lifexo chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
how sad! :'( i cried! but it's so beautiful! she forgives him... right? she has to!


smiley D chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
this is a really sweet story
TheCullensareAwesome chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
Aw they are so cute, great story!
TheCullensareAwesome chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Poor Edward
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