Reviews for Shattered
EvenDevilsCry chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Dude, Im fucking crying. I loved this. It is beautifully written. :3 -Trina
edwardcullenstrophywife chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Really good. I loved it. It was really Bella and Edward-y. Thanks for posting. ]
Kya chapter 2 . 2/13/2009
... How sweet.

Sincerely,

Kya
girl chapter 2 . 2/12/2009
aw gogod story ecept for the God damming him par,t God doesn't damn ayone to hlell unless there arre unrpeatant
Quituser chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
touching at the end, wow, edward really needs to be gentle with bella, yikes...

great one-shot.
radioactive77 chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
I always thought it was too good to be true that with all that physical contact he never really hurt her...I enjoyed this. Thanks.
choco-bananas chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
every time i read a story about edward "crying"

i always always cry too

i have no idea why, it just...is involuntary

so, obviously this amazing story had me in tears

beautiful
EastCompass chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
Beautiful piece of humanity, and it is beautifully written.

All I say is thank you, THAT's a true Bella and Edward's story.
lexii.ft.sandyy chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
OME!

That was brilliant!

Seriously!

*smiles like a little kid*

i put it in my favourites

D

-

LftS.
squody3015 chapter 2 . 12/18/2008
This really puts things into perspective how... paranoid their thoughts can be. One simple thing like not being able to where the ring complicates things so much. Great story!
nature132 chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
i LOVE you story so very much! please keep wrighting more storys. lots of love
music chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
omc I actually cried when I read this!

I don't know why, but everytime I read stories like this I can't stop it. It just flows

Well, thank you so much for your stories, they're all SO great.

But there's one thing I have to say: you often change your point of view. For example you write "she" instead of "I" or "they" instead of "we".
GreenPlayDoh chapter 2 . 12/10/2008
heyy great story,,

*whisper and looks around* it made me cry although i cry at everything...

but good job! keep it up
SacreJambons chapter 2 . 12/6/2008
This was so good! Great job!
BonitaChic chapter 2 . 11/12/2008
This was very good! I like the dialogue and the realistic situations. My only constructive feedback is that the first/third person is a little off in some spots. Looks like you wrote it in third person (he/she Bella/Edward) and then changed it to I. Otherwise- great writing!
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