|Reviews for Shattered|
| EvenDevilsCry chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Dude, Im fucking crying. I loved this. It is beautifully written. :3 -Trina
| edwardcullenstrophywife chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Really good. I loved it. It was really Bella and Edward-y. Thanks for posting. ]
| Kya chapter 2 . 2/13/2009
... How sweet.
| girl chapter 2 . 2/12/2009
aw gogod story ecept for the God damming him par,t God doesn't damn ayone to hlell unless there arre unrpeatant
| Quituser chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
touching at the end, wow, edward really needs to be gentle with bella, yikes...
| radioactive77 chapter 2 . 1/23/2009
I always thought it was too good to be true that with all that physical contact he never really hurt her...I enjoyed this. Thanks.
| choco-bananas chapter 2 . 1/18/2009
every time i read a story about edward "crying"
i always always cry too
i have no idea why, it just...is involuntary
so, obviously this amazing story had me in tears
| EastCompass chapter 2 . 1/14/2009
Beautiful piece of humanity, and it is beautifully written.
All I say is thank you, THAT's a true Bella and Edward's story.
| lexii.ft.sandyy chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
That was brilliant!
*smiles like a little kid*
i put it in my favourites
| squody3015 chapter 2 . 12/18/2008
This really puts things into perspective how... paranoid their thoughts can be. One simple thing like not being able to where the ring complicates things so much. Great story!
| nature132 chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
i LOVE you story so very much! please keep wrighting more storys. lots of love
| music chapter 2 . 12/16/2008
omc I actually cried when I read this!
I don't know why, but everytime I read stories like this I can't stop it. It just flows
Well, thank you so much for your stories, they're all SO great.
But there's one thing I have to say: you often change your point of view. For example you write "she" instead of "I" or "they" instead of "we".
| GreenPlayDoh chapter 2 . 12/10/2008
heyy great story,,
*whisper and looks around* it made me cry although i cry at everything...
but good job! keep it up
| SacreJambons chapter 2 . 12/6/2008
This was so good! Great job!
| BonitaChic chapter 2 . 11/12/2008
This was very good! I like the dialogue and the realistic situations. My only constructive feedback is that the first/third person is a little off in some spots. Looks like you wrote it in third person (he/she Bella/Edward) and then changed it to I. Otherwise- great writing!