|Reviews for Shattered|
| AnImpasse chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
Very sweet, but the switching between I and he/she was very confusing
| yoyoente chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
Wow, I really like the idea and the story. You did a good job on writing it, the only problem I saw (I hope you don't want to shoot me for this) is that you switched back and forth between first person POV (I sat down) and third person POV (He sat down). It just made the story a little confusing in those spots. Other than that, wonderful job! )
| Abstractly Sydney chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
i love this story! will there be more chapters?