Reviews for Shattered
Windy-08 chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
anauharris chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
you kept changing POV from first person to third. try to be more consistant. other than that, it was really good.
mom22boys chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
This was an awsome...hmm..."two shot". You are really good at writing out emotion. Maybe you share Jasper's gift. ;) I really enjoyed it!
Alicia chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
WOW! I typically don't like these kind of stories-but yours was REALLY good! Keep Writing!
LostInLove96 chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
That was really cute.

Is that all?
AnImpasse chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
Very sweet, but the switching between I and he/she was very confusing
yoyoente chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
Wow, I really like the idea and the story. You did a good job on writing it, the only problem I saw (I hope you don't want to shoot me for this) is that you switched back and forth between first person POV (I sat down) and third person POV (He sat down). It just made the story a little confusing in those spots. Other than that, wonderful job! )
Abstractly Sydney chapter 2 . 4/26/2008
i love this story! will there be more chapters?
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