Reviews for The Reality in Ceasing to Exist
Crazy Ninja chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
very out of character but i liked it especially the poem :D
Agent Striker chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
kind of sad and maybe unrealistic but i rather liked it. good job!
Crazy4Gymnastics chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I think ziva would rather die than go to a doctor of any kind especially a shrink but good story anyway great poem
NCISLover2009 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
Very powerful! I think you should continue it.
ziva-tony-TIVA chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
i think it need to be carried on it has a good start
Dewey'sGirl chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
It's a beautiful poem, so well written. One of my friends had contemplated suicide, more than once, until one of my friends did and then he saw it for what it really was. He saw how much it hurt, that it didn't stop the pain but made it larger and forced it onto oter people. He told me that Alyssa's death is what saved him.

It is a beutiful story; well done.
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
nice
Ziva4Tony chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Very powerful and emotional. The poem is great as is the story. Great job
Sweetcheeksncis chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
The story was meaningful and well written! Love the poem, it was beautiful!
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Good story!

Although, given Ziva's personality, I really don't know if she would go peacefully to a therapist's office!

hehe
its.intoxicating chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
I really really loved the poem. It is very beautiful. It is like a dialogue in itself, I really enjoyed it. Please keep writing.

i.i.
sara fenix black chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
OH! touching!

And of course, THANKS for giving a place to us, psychologist and therapist! you're giving an excellent message with this story.
Cake-Otaku chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
This was a great story! and compliments to the poem!
Cable Addict chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
I liked the concept and the poem, but I don't know if Ziva would come out and say 'I think I need help' that quickly.
1547291 chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
It was a very touchy story.

Thanks for sharing it.
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