Reviews for Avatar : Book One : Air
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11
should make book 2
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
palse gave some-love-here maby-booine-cood-thop or monquie-avater-legend-korra
Juicedmark chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
how don't know how much more of this i can take. You start these amazing stories but then just stop. hope you go over some of your older work and start them up again.
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
keep going
wolfey141 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Hey I love a lot of your stories but when are you going to update them?
Kaiba1288 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,

Good luck with this & any others you may write.

Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Peace & Jah Bless

dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
bervo why-does-booine-aillway-raw-dael-in-caeroosover it-be if booine-earth-bander-or-fir-bander
Cylon One chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
A very cool starting chapter.

Ron's the Avatar.

Avatar Ron.

Must see more.
NaruHarem4ever chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Awesome story, though a little on the, I suppose monologing would be the proper term. Not to say it isn't good, It just seems that some of the diolouge is a little forced. Well anyway, good story, can't wait for the next chapter. Ja Ne.
nr 25 peter chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Good first Chapter, can't wait to see more.:)
Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Le gaspe! Why hasn't this been continued as promised!

Wonderful, if Ron/Tara, beginning here... Please, PLEASE finish this! It's too great to sit on FF Net until it becomes obsolete!
Warlord-Xana chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
awesome story (and thank you for the pairing), can you have Brick or Yori be the Earthbenders of the past cause that would be cool.
Diaconsecond chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Excellent fic and execution I am waiting for an update
sr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
bervo the-water-naion-haets-the-firnaion it-cool-if-booine-beacme-eairthbander cood-ron-really-the-avter-the-oragin-told-bey

MR. SE7EN chapter 1 . 4/29/2008

KEEP GOING! oh and on your other kp story too
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