|Reviews for Avatar : Book One : Air|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
should make book 2
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
palse gave some-love-here maby-booine-cood-thop or monquie-avater-legend-korra
| Juicedmark chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
how don't know how much more of this i can take. You start these amazing stories but then just stop. hope you go over some of your older work and start them up again.
| Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
| wolfey141 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Hey I love a lot of your stories but when are you going to update them?
| Kaiba1288 chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,
Good luck with this & any others you may write.
Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Peace & Jah Bless
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 9/28/2009
bervo why-does-booine-aillway-raw-dael-in-caeroosover it-be if booine-earth-bander-or-fir-bander
| Cylon One chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
A very cool starting chapter.
Ron's the Avatar.
Must see more.
| NaruHarem4ever chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Awesome story, though a little on the, I suppose monologing would be the proper term. Not to say it isn't good, It just seems that some of the diolouge is a little forced. Well anyway, good story, can't wait for the next chapter. Ja Ne.
| nr 25 peter chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Good first Chapter, can't wait to see more.:)
| Donteatacowman chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Le gaspe! Why hasn't this been continued as promised!
Wonderful, if Ron/Tara, beginning here... Please, PLEASE finish this! It's too great to sit on FF Net until it becomes obsolete!
| Warlord-Xana chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
awesome story (and thank you for the pairing), can you have Brick or Yori be the Earthbenders of the past cause that would be cool.
| Diaconsecond chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
Excellent fic and execution I am waiting for an update
| sr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
bervo the-water-naion-haets-the-firnaion it-cool-if-booine-beacme-eairthbander cood-ron-really-the-avter-the-oragin-told-bey
| MR. SE7EN chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
DUDE AWESOME! TO THE MAX!
KEEP GOING! oh and on your other kp story too