Reviews for The Rest of Eternity: Bella and Edward
buggie21 chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
That was intense.

I really don't know what else to say lol.

Good job!

Sam.
heartsandroses chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
wow. that's all i can say. just wow. BRAVA! BRAVA! So, is there a reason why Edward hasn't said, "I Love You" yet. I mean i guess you can see it in his actions, but you know. So is there a reason or did it just not fit right with the dialogue.
CarolineB chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
VERY steamy...I think we all love to read about Edward losing control with his passion, so I look forward to more chapters!
TwilightEandB4ever chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
o hott i can tell this story is gonna be steamy update soon
myf.13 chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
very well written.

well done. :)
myf.13 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
cool story, i like it :)

I think though you should try to break the paragraphs up a little, they are a little longer than desirable, but other than that, it is really good!
misel chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
i literally cannot wait to see where this leads.

haha.

your writing style is very encapturing.

please continue :)
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