Reviews for A Love Worth Fighting For
cg2006 chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
O_O gah mihoshi's back! TTTT

but nice chapter. i'm interested. keep writing please!
chazsvp2 chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Finally! An extreme-drama Mihashi-centric fic!

I've been searching everywhere for such a great read!

And poor, poor Mihashi :( I hope Abe beats the shit outta Hatake...

Mihashi is used to telling fibs, so he'll still play baseball again though, right? Right? Ah...damnit. I really want to know what happens next T-T

Thank-you for the hard work! - The fic was great! I loved it!
Liann chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
i couldve sworn. to Ra. that i reviewed. srsly. didnt we talk about this at the end of the school year? tfw OTL... know that i
8Awesome8 chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Amazing plot! This story really grabbed my attention! Its amazing how you were able to capture the mood of each scene in the chapter! XD I love Ookiku Furikabutte! Can't wait for the next chapter! I send you love and cookies!
mihko sawatari28 chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
uhm... I know that this is not that kind of popular anime but I really like it and right now. am liking your story...

I really think that Mihashi's team mates doesn't mean what they said... and I am also starting to think that Abe were really mad at ren-ren and just bearing up wit him because he knew ren-reb could be a great pitcher...

just one thing, can I ask if that man is way too much older than Mihashi, will he appear again?

I do hope so... sorry if my review were so long
theallpowerfullme chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I really enjoyed this fic. I'm looking forward to what ever come next.
Ivanovna chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Awesome story, I can't wait for the update! Poor Mihashi D: What'll Abe do?
Piyopi chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Oh, poor Misashi! T3T;

D: *wants to see Abe's reaction*

I'm loving this so far and I can't wait for the next chapter! *loves*
anime-lover93 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008 so sad...TT_TT...I'm already tearing from the pain...

btw you should move your story to the section where it belongs...

actually made a section for it already...

other than that please keep on writing...i really want to see what is going to happen next!
Bodysnatchers chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
awe, you got Mihashi right! x3!

youve started on a great plot liner here, makes me jitter waiting for what Abe will do. bash em? raep em? (*o*!) commit Battery? (lol Pun) dont keep me waiting *O* I hate that this anime has so little fanficitons, (seriously, it doesnt even have its own column)

But Quality over Quantity, and you've started on the better foot!

a.k.a. europa chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
I can't wait to see what will happen next!

Will Mihashi leave the baseball club? And what Abe will do later when he know about this?

Please update soon~
Scyth chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
wow great story! please continue
Crimson Vixen chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
omg ! so ! ok! Here me out.

I read this prolly like as soon as it was updated/posted, and at first I scanned it, widened my eyes a little, had to read the whole dang thing, LOVED it to itty bitty pieces, told myself to be SURE to review it a little later when I was done with class, went to class, came back, checked my email, got a message from YOU telling me to read the fic you wrote, clicked the link, saw the title, went OMG I JUST READ THIS - THIS IS THE STORY MIKI WROTE! lol it was all very exciting for me! I read it before you told me, and loved it before you knew I knew, har har, isn't that grand?

You portrayed little mihashi just fine, love. It's hard not to write him wrong though, since its ok to make him emotional and submissive, since every little thing can set him off and he avoids confrontation like the plague. So his stuttering, his nervous behavor, his always thinking badly of himself and wondering if people on his team really saw him like he wants to be seen, all fit in really well. And I'm glad you threw all that in there, since it no only adds inner conflict, but I think they are important issues that should be touched with Mihashi, since things like that would bother someone like him (and personally, someone like me.)

Aww I just love a doting and worrying Abe. That guy pretty much makes Mihashi his responsability and looks after him since no one else will do a good enough job. Its just so horrible cute its impossible not to love. I wish Abe would have followed him home though! Cuz I knew as soon as it started getting dark and Mihashi was alone with his thoughts that bad things were going to happen! I just didn't know how bad!

I think the apology possibly being forged is totally plausible - that stuff happens, and boys can be nasty, so I don't think its too far out of the question that they would gang up on Mihashi like you made happen, or smack him around a little and break him a little bit in anger and revenge and stupid boy reasons. Thank god for that older guy coming to his rescue and walking him home. It was a cute idea, but I just couldn't help wishing Abe would magically show up and save the day, lol. But I'm just a sucker for that stuff. I'm sure if I wait, Abe's doting and fretting and all that will come in good time. I just love the relationship they have, you know. Who doesn't?

Poor Mihashi, get your rest.

Your stroy was really good, hun, really! At first I'm like "mah its kinda long I'll read it later" cuz you know how that goes sometimes, you have to be in the mood to read longer-ish chapters and such, but after I scanned it over and I had to read the whole thing right away cuz things caught my eye and I just had to know what happened right away, lol. I'm glad I did. It was lengthy and I'm so glad a multi fic is coming out for Oofuri since those are just so hard to come by, ya know? Your characters were well IC and you arranged situations to fit the plot, (for example, the apology was fake, so these things can possibly happen) and anyway you did a great job! I'll be watching this fic, and thats not something I do very often.
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