Reviews for The Window
xlawa chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Gosh, this was lovely. So very true to character and just delightful to read. Everything moved with such a gentle pace, and it was just refreshing.

I especially loved this part;

"She takes a half-step back. Both of their arms, still joined by their entwined fingers, lift into the air a bit.

“Come away from the window, love,” she says again, her breath catching slightly in her throat.

He turns his gaze back to her. She is waiting for him. Waiting for him to love her, waiting for him to have a life with her, waiting for him to turn away from the demons that are haunting him."

I swear, I read that over like four times. It was so moving, I adored it. It was such...such a wonderful adaptation of her devotion and love for him. Just the image of her staring at him with longing was so moving to me. And you didn't even type that, you just worded it to make me feel that way. This is a piece of art.

I loved this, truly. Please keep writing.
riceandchopstixs chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
I love this story.

Very much believable.
ABloodyWonder chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Irs excellent, love!

It totally rocks. Although I'm kind of a sweenett fan I know that this is quite the way its gotta be... *sigh*

Great job!
Goldilocks V.2 is an angel chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
That was an amazing story. Kudos!
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