|Reviews for Like The Rain|
| Nightcrawlerlover chapter 5 . 7/26/2013
Neat! Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. And I'm glad Lydia comforted Wednesday in the unique way that only she knew how to do as well. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)
| Nightcrawlerlover chapter 4 . 3/24/2011
This is really good! :) I like it. (I can see this as a dream that either Wednesday or Vincent is having, of course.)
Keep up your super-neat, very brilliant and creative writing! :)
| bob chapter 3 . 9/9/2010
| Trouble4eva chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
please. write. more.
my poor, tortured soul is crying for more!
all the best,
| Anasthesia Primrose chapter 3 . 4/30/2010
AH! (I think I is addicted) I so glad you finally wrote more! But ah!
| ooooh D chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Vicki thinks the bus driver is alcoholic. Very good! Very Good! You ended in preposition-BLEH! But still, was very good!
| anon chapter 3 . 4/12/2010
Well the Addams have a lot of money and presumably power from that
Yeah Wednesday would find that erotic and it was very cool to say so
Cool deities of the Underworld
So Joel got in good with those other boys?
| Nightcrawlerlover chapter 3 . 4/11/2010
Wow! Very cool (in an Addams kind of way). I like it.
Very well-written, too! :)
Keep up your awesome, superb writing! :)
| BleedTheScene chapter 2 . 4/10/2010
I love it so far, and hope to see you continue with this. :]
| Trouble4eva chapter 2 . 4/6/2010
I love it! Sweeney todd is the best movie ever! Well, one of them. I think that vincent is perfect for wensday. They make a cute couple. Carry on writing! Please! You rock!
| Nightcrawlerlover chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
Ah, I wasn't expecting that...! :)
I loved this part, though:
Finally the line up for this year’s play was roughly set and the three were standing in the front of the school when the bimbos burst through the doors and stood directly in their path. Vincent stood steadfast at Wednesday’s side, while Pugsley scanned the bushes, knowing their pension for jumping from behind.
“What’s up Tuesday?” the leader, Amanda, sneered. The others chuckled and smirked. It had been years since that joke started. Wednesday shrugged and looked up. “The sky. And apparently my social stock.” Some of the blonde’s growled in response to her snide comment, each of them highly protective of their social status. Amanda sucked in a breath, her face still red from losing her spot on last year’s play to a freak. “Don’t get comfortable bitch. When daddy finds out what happened…” Wednesday didn’t even let her finish “that’s the difference between the two of us. I work for everything I’m given. I put forth talent and effort, while your handed everything in life like the spoiled little daddy’s girl rich bitch you are!” it was the longest anyone had heard from Wednesday, and by the fire alight in her eyes, she was far from finished, yet ruffling from the weeds told them they were basically surrounded. Pugsley twisted his head, the pops indicating he cracked his neck. When suddenly, Vincent’s wrist twisted and a sweeping motion, and a gleam indicated that he had produced a straight razor. The blondes jumped back and gasped in shock as he looked at it, thumbing the blade.
“The first person to touch either myself or any of the Adams’s,” he muttered, “I’ll personally see to it that when they finally find your body, they won’t identify you without an act of god.” His tone was smooth but held the desired edge to get them all to sulk off. “This isn’t over Tuesday I promise you that.” Finally leaving, the Addams’ Two turned slowly toward Vincent, Wednesday speaking first. “Do you make it a habit to carry straight razors around?” she wondered curiously as he slowly nodded. “Easiest to conceal.” She smiled and nodded slightly. Pugsley smirked and elbowed Wednesday in the ribs. She glared at him from the corner of her eyes, making him jump just slightly and turn to walk home. “So, how was your first day in hell?” she asked to Vincent. His eyes focused on her for a second time and once again, Wednesday felt like the air had left the area surrounding her. She couldn’t think or focus on anything when he looked at her. ‘Damn it girl get a hold of yourself. You’re going to end up like your mother with father.’ She scowled slightly at herself as he began to speak “my day was exceptionally…normal. Rather boring I think” his eyes looked upward toward the sky as he began to lose himself in thought. “Yes this place has a habit of being that way.” She once again caught herself staring at his face. ‘Why can’t I stop looking at him?’ she wondered as she studied his features for the fifth or sixth time today. He smirked as he watched the sun begin to set on the horizon.
(I noticed there wasn't a period after "horizon", so I added it for you.)
Keep up your awesome, superb writing! :)
| anon chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
| kayXxXSeso-chan chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
| Nightcrawlerlover chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
‘No’ she thought to herself, ‘I must be delusional’ but then she heard the classic voice of Helena Bonham Carter singing as Ms. Lovett. She quickly grabbed a piece of paper from her bag along with a pen and wrote “Sweeney Todd Soundtrack?” and gently laid it on his leg. His eyes opened and looked down, once again drawing her into them. The corners of his mouth twitched upwardly and he wrote on the same paper “it’s not often to meet someone with such high senses of hearing and intelligence for a true performing art such as theatre.” With that comment, Wednesday could feel the corners of her own mouth twitch upwardly as she wrote upon the paper once again. “Of course I would there isn’t anything more interesting than an actor who can portray a character as Sweeney Todd with such accuracy to dementia and still retain the kind of charisma that Johnny Depp commanded. But I thought that Helena Bonham Carters performance was much better than his” ‘There’ she thought, ‘let him make what he can with that’ she sat feeling pretty proud of herself, that is she was until she felt the paper land on her knee. Looking incredulous, she snatched the paper and it read “yes her performance was one of the best of the year but I think the shock of seeing Johnny Depp sing was something that no one could really comprehend on the level that it deserved to see it.
Very brilliant! And by the way, Johnny Depp is one of my favorite actors.
Update soon, please! I can't wait to see what happens next.
| anon chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
YAHOO! Someone is finally doing Wednesday as teen and having a boyfriend please update I loved everything every line was such genius so much exceptionally brilliant lines and sentences I can't pick one out you are genius please update soon