Reviews for Forbidden Comfort
CMM7 chapter 4 . 12/13/2010
It's beautiful. I am sympathetic to Chris Who loosely try to control his hunger toward Mary. At the same time his hunger made him anger and made Mary a sufferer. Anyway he has to confess his feelings. Hope he would soon make it. Thanks for the update.
NivasAcrossTime chapter 4 . 12/13/2010
Wow...stunning...keep going...
wishuy chapter 3 . 12/12/2010
what a great story so far, please keep updating.
JH chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
jocnjny chapter 3 . 8/26/2008
Tell me you will write more. Despite Chris's best efforts it's still a struggle. Does getting out of town reinforce the walls? Buck isn't giving Chris a break either. I want to see what happens when Chris goes back to town. Please. Thanks for sharing your story, J
CrystalKenobi chapter 3 . 8/25/2008
Its good to see you continuing the story. ch 3 I liked the insight into Chris's struggle with what he feels for Mary. I also like the humor of buck interruppting the dream. I enjoyed having chris cave in to Mary pleads also. Look forward to the next chapter and hope to see you continue with the other story also.
Poohbear-29 chapter 2 . 6/27/2008
I just discovered your story and wanted you to know how much I'm enjoying it. I like how Mary and Chris know they have feelings for each other, yet they don't voice them. Really liked Mary's TLC of Chris in the second chapter and hope you plan to continue...Winnie
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 6/21/2008
Hee hee! Maybe Mary would come to his room if he went to recover there? Love it! Good stuff!
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Excellent beginning! Grabs the imagination and keeps it. Well done! I love Chris/Mary stories!
jocnjny chapter 2 . 5/6/2008

Another hit for me with this one. Thanks for sharing it, J
CrystalKenobi chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
I read both chapters 1 and 2 last night. Very well done. I could just see the picture of chris in panic over nathan letting mary in. The banter between chris and buck was right on I thought. in chapter 2 the dream and then how mary just stared at him had me thinking of doing just like the disney movie mermaid where the song goes kiss the girl, I just wanted to tell chris to go ahead and pull her down and kiss her. But at the same time the tension build up was great and as it builds up in the next chapters will be well worth the wait. Look forward to the next chapters. Please update soon.
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