Reviews for An Angel
Guest chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
why am i even surprised that your first attempt at angst is way better than most people could ever do? well, i guess it's not something you get used to :) anyways, this is really really good. i like that charlie gets to show how he sees bella after her transformation and that he'll always love her. so sweet. and as a side note, you're like the fastest replier ever. i bet i'll get one like five seconds after i submit this!
edwardcullansbuffy chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
that is so sad aww poor charlie i cant believe how sad this is.. great job
one2many chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
can you email me and explain what jsut happend and whos POV this is

im confused
Beatlemaniac1 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Oh God, I'm crying... this is your FIRST attempt at angst? It's unbelievably good. It's great to hear Charlie's POV written so well. Amazing job!
jesslikescoffee chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Aw, it was so sad!

Well-written, though. You're an amazing writer.
hot 101 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
WOW this was just amazing! you really can pull anything off can't you?.I don't even like angst stuff but your writing is just so addictive!.And you wrote it in Charlie's POV, which I'm sure wasn't all that easy, but you pulled it off perfectly!,
dancing.rox464 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
Ooh! I like it, a lot! I never thought about what Bella would do when Charlie died, but I like what you did with it!
rockin roxxy chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
That was beautiful left me crying! I know the feeling of losing a parent!
cryptokat chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
aw! This made me cry! Good job for a first attempt (mine wasn't nearly as good...)

I really like it!
Miranda chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
thats so sad. but you never said what happened to Charlie. I don't know how but somehow I knew it was charlie from the beginning. anyway, I like your rainbow dress story(though it was kinda pointless) and I can't wait to hear alice's point of veiw in "from where i'm standing". I think after Alice you should do Charlie. It will really
LilyAlice chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
That was really well written adn different, I don't think I've ever read a fanfiction about Charlie dying. really good though and sad.
edwardcullenissosexy chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
aww. how sad. it was really good though.
chocopanda16 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
*sniffles* I'm about to cry... Good story though.
CHEEKYCHIN chapter 1 . 4/27/2008

It goes indepth, but not too much.

Descriptive, but not so that you feel like crying (which isnt good, lol!)

Its heart-felt at the least.

Keep writing!
HermioneGranger1960 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
I loved it!
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