she gave him the same necklace twice

Thus was a beautiful, fantastic story. I loved the way the changes in the timeline cascaded; Vincet making a living with random jobs in Midgar is priceless. Cloud's mom was a wonderful character. I really liked the way you described Cloud's loss of self, and the way he chose to end the fix-it scenario. Thank you for sharing this story.

i decided one day to just come back and read this and i noticed a few... changes. not to say i’m unhappy, there’s not many stories out there that can even compare or beat this one. i’ve always loved eir’s tomorrow and i’ve never forgotten it. i read it while it was being uploaded and it hit just as well as it first came out. i’m sad cloud’s mom didn’t survive again, she and zangan seemed to be hitting it off very well.

either way, i’ll always love this story. thank you so much for sharing it.

J'ai adoré ce fic que je vienne de découvrir.

I've only read two FF VII fic and where I've I've abandon the first after a couples of chapters, I couldn't leave this one until the last chapter. So many thanks for sharing.

I wonder why I haven't notice this before because little Sephiroth reminded me of Jarod from 'The Pretender'.

I was thinking something along those lines when I read that both moms died.

Is Elfreda also dead ?

I'm really starting to like this story.

Would you believe it if I said I like it ?

I can relate to. Because I was once bitten by a dog when I was a kid. Oh it's nothing serions but I do change side of the road when I heard or see a barking dog.

jesus christ the tears pouring out of my eyes are holy water
i feel cleansed, author-san

I think you did an amazing job, honestly. The ending was just that, an ending. In all its bittersweet glory. It certainly has me feeling some kind of way. I'm really happy for Sephiroth and sad that it's over, but I can't even think of any thing I would have done differently. I think in all the different FF7 time-travel fics I read, this is definitely my favorite.

this was an absolutely beautiful read, thank you for sharing :)

Didn't his mom already give him the necklace last chapter or maybe earlier in this chapter?