|Reviews for Unservable|
| CurlyHairedWookie chapter 12 . 3/13
Has anyone sent you prompts? Because his story is delightful, and I've reeeeeally enjoyed reading it...
| ChiiSC chapter 12 . 12/11/2013
Hey! I reread this again today, the last time was at least a year or so ago. I really hope you get back into writing, even if you post just short chapters to get your muse. I really like this story, its flows all together and easily captures my attention to keep reading it throughout.
| fan-rei chapter 12 . 12/9/2013
I found this story a while back and reread it just now.
It 's a really great story . thanks you for writing it . I hope you'll get your muse back and continue it. It looked as you have still several plots going with sheila and angela at best.
| deathgeonous chapter 3 . 8/5/2013
Ok, now this may sound a bit harsh, but..., I loved this fic, so I personally think that the last chapter was very cruel, because it gave me one of the most horrible things to have crushed, hope. I had hope that this would be continued after a long time and a horrible cliffhanger, and it never was. Ah well, thanks for writing what you did write of this though, and good bye for now.
| Rea Karen chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
I'm in love with this. Truly. I really hope you pick this up soon. :)
Prompt: Family - Emily has to meet Goliath sometime. All the other rookery brothers though its not incredibly nessessary. I think establishing an even tighter bond between Angela and Emily would be interesting. Since it seems Emily isn't used to having such a familiar back up system like that. It would be intriguing.
- Strength - Emily beginning physical therapy and her struggle with needing help. Demona is patient and reassures her of her strength, "You can handle me, can't you? I'd say that's more than enough proof."
- Stone - Maybe in reference to 'stone sleep' or apathy. Also maybe to building a thick layer around your heart.
Don't know if any of this is jogging anything for you but I hope either way you continue writing. Whether it's this story or something else you have lying around. Don't stop writing. You have a gift for it.
- Lil' Miss
| OnyxTemplar chapter 12 . 4/1/2013
Kind of bummed out to see such a great story sit idle for so long. If you still check your reviews though here are a few words for you; Expulsion, Transition, Annihilate, Confirmation.
I do hope that you pick this story back up and run it out at least to the end, hopefully one that ends with Goliath no longer an asshole (personally I've always wanted him dead), and Demona married to Emily.
You're a great writer, one of my personal favorites, talented and skilled enough to craft a dramatic story without getting bogged down in the typical literary black holes of misunderstandings that go unresolved and characters who refuse to see their own faults.
| Lamar Rivers chapter 12 . 3/12/2013
How about "discovery". As in the clan discovering the true nature of Demona's relationship with Emily and Demona taking Angela in after she ran away.
| ScOut4It chapter 12 . 3/11/2013
Follow the plot with Sheila;
Complete it eventually;
Change of setting? Vacation? Working vacation?;
Emily confronted with some of Demona's darker skeletons;
What happened to the run-ins with Fox? Some competition and jealous sex is nice too;
Sheila should want something sexual with Emily too: really build on that plot line, it's the most intriguing;
Watching the clan try and accuse Demona of using Emily is more comic than dramatic now; I think Angela's admission will help them realise their own level of investigative incompetence.
Maybe Sheila eventually finds out about Demina's secret and tries blackmailing Emily and getting sex perks... Yeah, it prob won't really work out for her.
It's been a year...
| ScOut4It chapter 11 . 3/11/2013
I read this a long time ago. I still really enjoy it. I don't know about your other stories, but I really hope that you stick this one out till the end. It seems that some updates have happened since I last read it. I am intrigued by what Sheila wants with Emily and why she's being so methodical in trying to achieve it. Nice twist.
I do hope that you get some tail sex detail into this at some point ;-) You teased with the dream ( but I'm glad you didn't let her complete it; I prefer 'real' sex to dream sex, especially for the first time sex).
Regarding your possible-future Voyager pairings... I've never found Janeway all that attractive. So B/7 all the way and OC action is nice too. Maybe 7/OFC ? Think about it... But please work on this first.
Thanks for a lovely read!
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/8/2012
| shycoyotegirl chapter 12 . 11/18/2012
more please! the drama between Angela and the rest is killin me
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/13/2012
Magic and family sound good to me. As well as soul mates could be fun. Or what about kidnapping? And I really like this story.
| CoopSwag213 chapter 12 . 9/11/2012
I think this is a really good story and cant wait for the next chapter to come out
| Gnarled Bone chapter 11 . 9/6/2012
You ever going to pick this back up?
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/31/2012
Coffee n cookies
Hope this helps :)