Reviews for Maybe Just the End
bloody-suki chapter 1 . 3/16
This was lovely! I really enjoyed the whole swim up the elevator and how you had Leo shove down his fear and focus and what he could do instead of focusing on all the things he didn't know. Thank You for sharing this with us :3
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27
My fave line has to get the one where Donnie woke up fighting which was good for Leo's heart but bad for Raph's face! It made me crack such a large smile and laugh
SupernovaWolf chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
Oh, I really liked this one. My heart was racing when Leo and Don were swimming up the elevator shaft. I would be ecstatic if you decided to make this a multi-chapter fic. I mean, what's gonna happen next? The possibilities are endless. How do they get out of the city, does Donnie build a boat? Do they stay hidden, or does someone see them? What happens during their trip south? Do they make new friends or enemies? Do the super storms hit? OMG, this story is gonna drive me crazy for ages now. Great story, loved it.
TheInvisibleShapeshifter chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
This was fantastic! Very well written and descriptive, I liked how you portrayed Leo's worry for his family and how they'd get through this catastrophe together.
Tatsumaki-sama chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
Amazing story! I loved the whole feel of the apocalypse and the turtles, especially Leo, trying to make it through it.
CupcakeGoodness101 chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
You're such a talented writer. Please keep up the great work. I do enjoy your TMNT fanfics so much. 3
CharmedSerenity chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Day after Tomorrow, right. And I doubt Leatherhead's dead, he can swim underwater after all.
TheDarkKunoichi chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
This is actually very good! Leo really held out until the end. The scenarios are so very similar to what's happening to my country now that it's kinda scary. We've been struck by a super storm too, (we just call it a super typhoon here) and so many people suffered and died. It's probably one of our worst tragedies yet. (Condolences to those families in Tacloban city, Leyte and to all those in the Visayas region who lost everything, especially their lives...)

But enough of that, I would like to say that writing a story with a scenario like a superstorm or earthquake or zombie outbreaks or doomsday thingies are not done much, but many of those stories in that situations are actually very good. I like how they coped with the situation here. Not many of us realizes that they're worse than we are when it comes to floods and earthquakes because they're freakin underground! Where do you think the water goes when there's rain? In the sewers! Which do you think suffers first whenever there's an earthquake? The underground! Their state is much more terrible than ours, and I like to see things like that happen once in a while in stories. It just makes them more realistic in real life because they're actually being affected by natural calamities.

I love this! Beautifully written, how you wrote Leo's perspective on things is brilliant! I hope you will write a sequel explaining how they got out of that situation but I guess it's much better leaving the fic as it is right? Let the readers imagine how they got out of that! XD
Tarropins chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
oh my gosh amazing work! your so talented! i love this story, thank you so much for sharing it! man everything about that was great. i really loved this. keep up the great work!
Dark Lady of Silence chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Wow, this was...interesting. I liked a lot.

Cya! :)
CuddlyHawk chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Aw this is so sweet! A little angst, a little rescue, some bonding. Perfect, in my eyes :)
Sarachan chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I'll admit I was hesitant to read this fic because I wasn't sure if it was going to be a tragedy. Lets just say I'm pleased it wasn't that type if story and that it made me want to cry tears of joy. And great job writing Leo's pov. :)
toumei chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Super good!
ThornsOfaPerfectRose chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
best fanfic ever.
I wish to Fly chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
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