Reviews for The Hotel
QueenMaj chapter 1 . 6/1/2015
This both disturbs and intrigues me.
The Flamehog chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Cool. I like it.

I like sensible stories about an Teenaged or young adult Yachiru. Can ya do more?
crazyarsonist chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
Well this is a new and refreshing read. Kinda reminds me of the kind of stories Stephen King writes.

Thanks for posting, I enjoyed it.
Madi-san chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
Now I can't stop listening to that song! It has been added to my list of random songs that make me happy because they remind me of different strange things that amuse me. There are a lot of those. But anyway, I was completely disturbed... in a good way... I think. No, I really liked it. I got chills and everything! Very haunting. It seems I love your horror, too! It would be fun to read some more. *wink*
judikickshiney chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
That was the best birthday preseant ever. I am pleased, and completely creeped out.

I feel for Yumichika and Renji...

Yachiru scares me.

Oh! I laughed so hard at this part:

“Don’t listen to him,” Yachiru’s voice came from behind us. “Ken-chan’s a big softy.”

Soft wasn’t the first thing that came to my mind. More like hard. Very hard.

I nod, introducing myself. “Renji.”

“Just call him, Zaraki,” Yachiru tells me, giving a light smack on the man’s washboard stomach. “He won’t bite,” she winks. “Hard.”

And I somehow doubt her words.

I was all "whats hard, huh Renji?"

Ya, not supposed to be funny, but it was. To me at least.

I had to inform you of it. It made a lovely double entandra.

I loved it!

Prfect first person, you are awesome!

chica blanca chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
great take on the song. I've always loved that song. took me a minute to figure out who was 'speaking', Renji was good in this role. As always, awesome work

Cya crazy and paul,


chica and marcus
SkylessStar chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Well, it's a bit strange -in a good way.

Maybe it's the idea of the time not passing, the fact that you don't specify too much, or something else that I'm not sure of, but I like it.