|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Vanishing Eyeliner|
| AuthorinAbsentia chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
I likey. hm-hm. *nods*
| AkumuKitty9797 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Lol Draco sounds like me when I can't find my eyeliner xD
I burst out laughing when I found out where he left it ;D
| IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Hehe cute story )
| Spiffing Repartee chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Hm, I didn't like the narrative tone, it was somewhat patronising. However, the premise was sort of funny.
| Matrim363 chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Hmm, not bad for a first attempt. Decidely decent story line the complete and total lose of dignity of two characters already lacking makes for an amusing read. The only thing that I could fault you for is that you seem to enjoy making up words as you go along. "awaking" I mean honestly who learned you to spoke english?
| RadicalReason chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Haha! I love it! This is your first story? I'm on my first story too. Life as an "author" is not easy. But then again, life without Draco's eyeliner isn't easy either...
| MissingEden chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Maybe you can use all those saved-up swearwords on your brother. Harry Potter is anything but childish (especially the way it gets written on this site) and even if it were...well...do it anyway. It's fun!
This made me laugh. A lot. Actually I haven't stopped yet.
Welcome to the site. I sense you will do well here.