Reviews for Harry Potter and His Sister
Insertcoolpunhere22 chapter 3 . 2/8
I'm not sure if this is a troll or not...but if it isn't then I'd say you have an okay plot line. As you said, these first few chapters you were seeing the characters' reactions to Raven, which is always fun. I'd try making the chapters longer and maybe checking over your grammar a bit (might be typos). Other than that, cool story. : )
Ciara1214 chapter 3 . 1/9
LOL
Ciara1214 chapter 1 . 1/9
Shes awesome! :]
RosaSilvermist chapter 3 . 9/2/2014
Okay I didn't like that one.
RosaSilvermist chapter 2 . 9/2/2014
Nice. Write more.
paige chapter 3 . 8/5/2014
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Sick But Sane chapter 3 . 5/29/2014
Can you add more length to the chapters?
RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
I love the story. D I like the fact that you have Harry and Draco as friends. D
Purplemoon1625 chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
Update and hurry
Oliver-Max-Lyon chapter 3 . 7/19/2013
Good wiring. Update soon
Valerie chapter 3 . 4/11/2013
Update soon please but don't make her bi l don't judge its just i don't know just please update
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
This is the worst story ever. Just saying. There is nothing to Raven at all. And Ravensclaw? Seriously? RAVENCLAW.
Miss. Sweetnie chapter 3 . 12/23/2012
MMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE E!
To lazy to login chapter 3 . 12/19/2012
Love it. Tho, don't take this the wrong way. But saying somethings over and over, gets a litte boring. It's feels a little rushed too. I do like the part with Snape tho. How ever, all in all, I do like it and would love to read more.

-Rose With 2 Sides
ZeLuNatic22 chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
Please make it Luna please! They'd be awesome together please! Ahaha I absolutely love Luna and I really ike your Raven. Please update again soon! Please!
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