|Reviews for Father of the Year|
| defyingthegravity chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Awwww! You London!
| NinjaRawrSG chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Yeah London! Rebel against rich daddy! I loved this story and everything else that I've read that you wrote! I should really stop using exclamation marks! :P (!)
| Cha's Aegis chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
First off, I'd like to apologize for you getting tagged by an idiot, wannabe troll. Not that I have any control over idiots who must be jealous of me to go through so much effort, but I don't like when others get dragged into my supposed battles. So to make up for it, I thought you should get a legit review from the real thing. _
Although I have never read anything in this fandom before, hell, I'm not even remotely familiar with this fandom, I really enjoyed this piece. Without knowing a single thing, I got a very complete picture of who was who and what was going on without you having to spell it out. Even I'm guilty of writing on the assumption that anyone who reads my stories will be familiar with the fandom. So, you've done a great job in this regards.
Normally I'd be telling you that it's grammatically incorrect to start a sentence with 'but,' but I do get this entire piece is London's father's thoughts and no one is going to be grammatically correct in speaking or thinking. Not unless they're exceptionally well-bred and I'm certain there will be allowances in those instances as well.
I think you captured the emotions of a distant father beautifully here. It's clear he cares for London and isn't trying to be a father just because he likes to assert his authority. It's also clear that he's not exactly terribly close as a father should be if he has to keep up with his daughter through the tabloids.
Overall, I really enjoyed this fic and clearly you are very talented as a writer. Again, I apologize for the loser with no life. Fortunately, that's the beauty of anon reviews, they're so easy to erase. ;P
The real, awesome deal,
| CHa's Aegis likes jewle smezxz chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I am going report this story because I'm pissed I have a fat jiggly brazilian butt and I cannot find a better way to express it. And I haven't had hot smexxxy carpet from my lesbo lover Jewel in a long time.
Cha's Aegis of Critics United - come and flame our forum!
| defunctaccounttexmon chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
I don't usually like stories like this, but I've got to confess; I really like the way you used first-person perspective in here. Usually, it has a tendency to snare fanfic writers and makes it difficult for them to control their tenses or keep proper perspective. Such is not the case here. You stay cohesive and consistant throughout.
More than that, though, I enjoy the way you've so accurately personified fatherhood. The thoughts running through his head are sensible and level-headed-not at all as outre as others have a tendency to write them- yet, there's a core of very affectable emotion running through them that makes the moment he acquiesces to her request almost... tender. There's a lot of realism and practicality written into his character which makes his aspect of the story realistic, considering how hands-off he was in the series. It gives you the glimmer of hope that he's more than an ATM machine; on some level, he is in fact a parent.
I do think that a couple of things could have been improved here. I would have loved to see more character development for London. Right now, she's a quite flat- little more than a name and a source of contention, even. But if you give her character a little more involvement, and share a little more of the dialogue between the two, we'll catch a better glimpse of her backbone and her resolve. We'll see London as more than a spoiled brat and she'll emerge as a stronger character.
All in all, I really liked it. The delf-deprecating tone and and little touches of realism make this story an interesting little read. Thank you for taking the time to write a well-thought out fic, Lodylodylody. The effort makes all the difference!
-Happy writing! :)
-Texty Monster Halcyon
| draco122 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
ok first off if a sequal to this we written it would be funny as hell. Anyway very funny and even better then that it was good and i mean really good. I bow to your skills.
| X59 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
that was really interesting.
| digigirl02 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Nice, I like the last line the best.
| woundedhearts chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
Another great story...Wow!:) I liked how Mr. Tipton came around. I especially loved how London told him to "go to hell" awesome!:)
| clarembees chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I'm not at school so I'm working my way through the stories of yours that I've missed, starting with this one, which was phenomenal.
I generally don't like reading stories from 1st person POV but this couldn't have been done any better. I totally felt like I was inside Mr. Tipton's head.
I could feel everything he was feeling as he listened to London tell him to go to hell and his aprehension over her dating Cody . . . I could feel it all.
And the last line . . . Framed by that self deprecation and awareness of him knowing that he was never the best dad . . . The perfect way to end it.
| MorganRose13 chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Awesome! oh, and btw, with the story ideas, i like icarly stories. im writing one at the moment but the other computer is busy so (. Anyway, got any ideas? i love doing seddie stories! would you like to be the first to preview my story when it's finshed? i could pm you it. oh and sorry i didn't reply in a pm but i was browsing and well, you know. cya!
| o3.dts chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
please continue this :(
| The PhantomHokage chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
Nice I liked it I liked this story a lot I hope you do more stories like this
| Deyinel chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Very good story, touching and very well written. Interesting point of view as well, thanks for sharing!
| Breanne Clearwater chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
I really, really, really liked that. Alot. Good work. .