Reviews for Hypocrisy
Dusk Falling chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
Another brilliant story I loved the line "He is 22 and it feels like the end of the world." I loved the whole story, really. You're great at writing angst )
Red's 21st chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Love the angst! I really liked the line "He is 22 and it feels like the end of the world." It seems so powerful!
MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Brilliant piece of writing. Great job with it.
momiji-k chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Very good! I liked it. I don't think she could ever shoot him, but that was a great bit of raw emotion in that fic. Very, very good!
words without chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Wonderful. I don't know why, but for me Ishbal-angst never gets old when it comes to these two. The line "He is 22 and it feels like the end of the world." in particular made me wince for him. Good job!
srdfgchvjboguvjh chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
This is... this is... THIS IS PERFECT! I love it. However, you may wanna add a "lime" warning in the summary.