|Reviews for Malfoy Manners|
| Madam'zelleGiry chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Wow. I can't believe that this story hasn't received more attention. I absolutely love the way that you've portrayed Lucius; I find it to be very believable, especially when you add your OC into the picture. She really seems to bring something special to the story that makes this fascinating to read.
I almost hate to say it but I think that the ending really does work with the whole piece. It adds a nice sense of melancholy closure.
This only complaint that I have is that it does seem a bit rushed. I think it would benefit if you took the time to work on the pacing. But the story remains excellent as it is.
Overall, I really enjoyed this. Thanks so much for sharing and very nicely done!
| blameless nameless chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
wow! that was cool! I really didnt expect the twist towards the end. good job.