Reviews for Ordinary World
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15
Aweee that was really sweet :))
BlackMoon6666 chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
The only thing I can say is Aw! Here I was sitting here reading this feeling so sad for my poor Edward and almost crying with him and you go and make it a happy ending. Yay thank you
chaoticNightmare chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
Wow if I didn't know better I'd say you and I are mentally linked considering I had a simmlar idea only the were in japan and the first time ed thought he found roy it was really envy.
Fantasy's Embrace chapter 1 . 10/4/2008
Very beautiful and romantic! I LOVED IT! KEEP IT UP!
Xpectashauns chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Beautiful
inactiveaccount78594 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
So sad... but I was so happy at the end -_- Would've been better if I could remember the song... I'll have to listen to it when I get the chance.
FMA-SN-Fan chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
i loved this...prolly my fav oneshot...i love ur oneshots!
DarthAnimus chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
This is so lovely. I was actually waiting for something horribly depressive with the summary but you have it such a wonderful happy ending. I really like the meeting, you made it so beautiful.
Nefariously chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Woah... first T rated, I think

I love this story AND the song, it's threaded together brilliantly D

Hope you will continue to write more Roy/Ed fics, and good luck on your novel. Wish I could read it P
Oni Princess Melloney chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Oh My GOD! I Want More!
Chanberry chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
That was such an awesome story! If only the movie actually ended like that...
MARYLOVER chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Nice short fic, I thought there would be a sad ending, but finally you made me smile... bye