Reviews for Elementary Calculations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Albus is an ass. I really hate what he did to Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tutors not Hogwarts! |
![]() ![]() Interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I'd kinda like to see a story where Harry calls Fawkes out on his hypocrisy; a bird that supposedly only attaches to good people instead choosing to stay faithful to a wolf in sheep's clothing. I'd like to see what a deservedly shamed Fawkes' response would be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An enraged Harry going to Hoggywarts to get even with those that have abused him and killed his family! Sounds like fun! Good job! |
![]() ![]() Sweet story... love the character development... Thank you for your time creating such an interesting and unique experience. Chris |
![]() ![]() Oh, this was so deliciously satisfying. Snape really working for Voldemort is a trope that isn’t done often enough. |
![]() ![]() I like Dumbledore getting what he deserves more than I should. He always interfered excessively in Harry’s life. |
![]() ![]() Smart!Harry is a treasure. |
![]() ![]() This is a good start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao! Wonderful |
![]() ![]() Now no reason to hate voldermor tereason being first of all it was a war and james was a bully also voldermort did give lilly a chance to step aside and lilly coud belong the the eveeningshad or evergreenshade fakily gaunt family possible the slytherin family magic could have saved harry from voldermort and that harry willingly gave up [parseltongue in the end as he knew that he was another descendant of slytherin so yes he wouldnt want to be seen as the next dark lord and witches were burnt rape kidnapped so wwere muggleborns muggleborns tried to change the cultiure corrupt brainwash and no art or magic is good or evil only power you can kill with a light spell you can heal huypotize cure depression with dark arts you can kill painlessly with dark arts and quickly you can protect heal with ark arts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Sad to see it left on a cliffy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent. |
![]() ![]() one would make tom riddle jr make an unbreakable vow in parseltongue use the philosphers to ne to turn him into a baby could work harry and hermione raise him the foster parents the philosphers stone could heal tom riddle jr ss make him feel love difference his no death eaters no they dont die they became the knights of walapurgis heal alivce and frank longbottom using the philosphers stone lets the flammels raise harry the gflammels could teach ahrry hermione tom riddle jr all the 4 houses alchekmky cure remeus lupins problem make him proffesor hulk huls body human brain in control werewold body human in cnontrol cure bellatrixs insanity bellatrix and remus if bellatrix turns good |