Reviews for Whitmore Private High
BeachGirl114 chapter 5 . 8/29/2009
Very different. What will happen on sunday with Edward and Bella. He seems to really like her but she a jerk to
sweetsurprise26 chapter 5 . 8/23/2009
update this is awesome!
saya.sen chapter 5 . 6/10/2009
I like this so far but I can't see where you're going to take it.
FLPotter Girl chapter 5 . 10/29/2008
you should totally continue this story! love it! it would be funny to see Edward's reaction to the line up of guys wanting to sit next to Bella at the movies and maybe the posse that surrounds her! plus his reaction to Lauren!
EdwardandBella101 chapter 5 . 10/10/2008
I love it, long as it has the words Edward Cullen and sexy in the same sentence I usually do... lol but it's great maybe you could have...

more tension with bella and lauren

or bella thinking that Edward likes someone else... e.g. Tanya or Lauren and so then wants him to be jealous and goes out with Jacob or something...

XD Whatever it is it should be good :D
Just-Peechy chapter 5 . 7/18/2008
i dont really have any ideas either. this is a really good story. please update soon!
Misfit-Of-The-Real-World chapter 5 . 6/19/2008
bella could be so dense sometimes! i mean come on! of course shes falling for edward! hopefully hes falling for her too and she wont screw it up by making it look like she goes out with jacob or mike! thats a no no! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
xJAYx chapter 5 . 6/7/2008
Is the next chapter the try outs? I wanna know what happens and Bella better beat Laurens but nby showing off can Edward see how talentred she is aswell? EDward POV! Update soon!


twilight is my heroine chapter 5 . 5/29/2008
well... it was great! but as far as ideas im stuck, but if i get ne, no matter how bad or cheesy ill PM u, mayb itll give u a idea or somthing, idk. update soon!
twilight is my heroine chapter 4 . 5/29/2008
setting up the over obsessive mike and then theres jake, ah bella in gym... this should be interesting as always
twilight is my heroine chapter 3 . 5/29/2008
must i review for EVERY chapter? or do u already know what im going to say?
twilight is my heroine chapter 2 . 5/29/2008
your really good with adjectives! MORE MORE!
twilight is my heroine chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
NoLongerAnAccount00 chapter 5 . 5/16/2008
OHH i love the story! Most peopel dont write bella the way you do, so your story is very unique! UPDATE SOON!
thespeshulkid chapter 5 . 5/10/2008
in the next chapter

BELLA POV edward embaresses lauren in front of everyone and bella laffs loudly, edward looks at her and smiles. bella blushes. :P SORRY IF IM BEING TO DESCRIPTIVE



edward just dissed lauren and hears bella laugh, and looks at her and smiles, he has a flash back of his reunion with bella and stuff. and during his flashback he realizes he might have small feelings for her too.



she goes to her dorm thingy and does dormy stuff. :P and alice jessica and bella have truth or dare. bella reveals she likes edward A LITTLE ;) and alice gets excited and tries to find out who edward likes


alice keeps pestering edward about who he likes. and edward EVENTUALLY gives up and says he likes one of alices dorm mates. alice blurts out BELLA? edward is too embaressed to admit its bella so he says no, jessica. alice is stunned and says really? ok..


alice goes too dorm and bella asks alice if edward told her who he likes and alice tells he. bella is upset and feels embaressed to talk to edward.

HAHAH SOORRY! u can use this idea if u want. but if this inspired u to write sumthing else..AWESOME! glad too help! ;)
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