|Reviews for My Brown Eyed Girl|
| V3Ru chapter 22 . 8/31/2012
hey! i just finished what is written of your story and let me tell you that i love it.. is sweet and simple but addictive none the less... hope you cacht up with it soon...
| V3Ru chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
hey! Im starting to read this story and it looks promising but i cant not notice that it is not finished yet... because ist not mark as comlete... are you planning on finished it any time soon? best wishes
| Mystik Angel 85 chapter 22 . 1/9/2011
Are you finishing this story? Please do. I loved it from the start.
| twilightmom96 chapter 22 . 5/16/2010
i hope u finish this i love this story
| Katherine Plumber chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
OMG! I can't believe it found it! This is one of the stories that made me fall in love with ! But then I lost it... but now I've found it again! Yay! Anyway, this is an amazing story!
| barbiedoll123 chapter 22 . 1/9/2010
was that chapter looking back what edward was thinking about bella
| EdwardsKitten chapter 22 . 1/8/2010
May I suggest that next time you post a chapter after a long absence, you start with a quick recap? It is helpful to we readers to get back in the loop.
| mrsmcCarthy247 chapter 21 . 7/27/2009
i was so into this story not even funny
and it just ended and i went to click the next button and it wasnt there ..this is very sad
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN
this is such a good story...words cant even describe how much i love it
| taketwo97 chapter 14 . 6/9/2009
Ahh..Journey. I was singing along with Jasper the whole song. I got choked up so many times in this chapter, great job..
| twilightmom96 chapter 21 . 6/7/2009
I am new just read your story today. its good I would like to see them get married and how she deals with being a military wife..my husband is a marine so that would be cool to see. I havent seen Bella and Edward that way before in a story
good job i have enjoyed what u have written i hope u plan to continue
| Bellawitch36 chapter 14 . 5/9/2009
God, you are killing me, why the Air Force
| Hope4more chapter 21 . 4/3/2009
Sorry it took forever for me to review. Real life has been out of control. However, this whole dang thing has me torn up inside. The longest I have been without my husband has been 2 months. So it was nothing really, plus if I really needed too I could have packed up the kids and drove the few hours away he was. I really can't fathom being away from someone like that, plus the enviroment they are going to is damn ass scary. Awesome job at detailing it all. I wonder if this is making it that much harder for Edward or Bella...knowing what is coming for them.
Can't wait for more...no matter how long it takes, I will still read when you post. Thx
| brytam chapter 21 . 3/24/2009
I have just finished reading this from start to finish and I am anxiously awaiting your follow on chapters. I cried, I laughed, I blushed. This is an amazing story line. Please don't keep us waiting.
Thanks for your story
| Vi0lentSerenity chapter 21 . 3/24/2009
So i just found this story last night and just wanted to let you know you are doing an awesome job with it.
I almost stopped half way through because the girl i was talking to about it pointed out in the summary that it said BxJ...which is something i wanted to ask about. I know you said Bella will never end up with Jacob...and from the vibe i get, i can't see them taking that turn ya know? So i was wondering if it was just a misprint and you meant AxJ? Which im really hoping because i know Jacob is in love with Bella...but i just dont see that side to her. No doubt or question in her mind...so yeah. (I'm tempted to post the conversation but it was just a series of explicits with some major confusion followed by some serious confusion on PhnxPrnss's part...My eyes jump around with im perusing new stories so i sometimes miss finer details.)
No harm in asking right?
I'm really enjoying this though, glad i stuck with it. It's exactly what i needed last night...lighthearted with just a trace of tension. I love drunk handsy Alice because she misses Jasper. Sigh. I just love Jasper as a whole. Any relation to him just gets me all frazzled. And BxE...Very sweet. I've seen a lot of stories that start them in a similar way but then blow a little miscommunication (like the love thing or the jacob thing) way out of the water. You keep them at a good pace, doubtful of their own self worth but would rather work on it then just walk away in a mound of self-pity. And their happy time? Hoott.
You mentioned in another note about slow progression but i think you are doing an awesome job. You dont want to pile too much on them too fast, and they all deserve some bonding time before getting separated.
Keep up the good work :)
| Ms. Jily chapter 21 . 3/23/2009
That's OK that it took you forever. It was worth it!
I was getting teary eyed when Alice and Edward were talking :(
Update again soon!