Reviews for Avatar: The Wind On The Waves |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am wondering if you wrote any more to continue this story? |
![]() ![]() I know this TWELVE YEAR OLD BOY did not just fuck Katara a FOURTEEN YEAR OLD. WHEN I WAS TWELVE THE ONLY THING I WAS FUCKING WAS UGLY |
![]() ![]() Update pls |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the belt switch! |
![]() ![]() Please update, i know it has been around 6 years but the story's just too good. |
![]() ![]() Loveee , plees continued |
![]() ![]() Great story! I would love to see another chapter! |
![]() ![]() solid critizism you say, Well you asked for it... I for one am glad you did not bring up the "preggers" question as you put it because there hasn't been any need to. Trust your writing instincts and learn from other people's writings. Reading other works can tell you what works and what doesn't, it doesn't even have to be ATLA fanfiction to be helpful, IT could be anything |
![]() ![]() I love it. |
![]() ![]() Brava sir, brava. Felt like a raunchy version of avatar. Totally realistic and i dig it. Can't wait to read on |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really... You leave the story on a damn cliff hanger like that... Its been 4 years dince the last update. The least you could do is put in the description that the story was incomplete... I started reading this story thinking that is was complete... Well I wasted my time... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Kota could you please update this story? I've been waiting since I read it in 2012 and I was hoping you would update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please finish this story! It's too good to leave it as is! |
![]() ![]() When are you going |