|Reviews for Child Of War|
| Nelleke chapter 10 . 11/3/2013
Beautiful story, I enjoyed every word of it. It feels very real, like it could have happened in the 19 years we missed. Thank you for your story!
| smylealong chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
Beautiful! I recently boarded the ship of Ted and Victorie and yours is one of the first stories I read. Loved it. Very beautifully conceived and executed. Fantastic job.
| Cerice Belle chapter 10 . 9/13/2013
Loved this story! So cute, and you made some fabulous OCs! Great job!
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/20/2013
I know u were running out of ideas...but honestly, the time jumps were perfect.
Best fanfic i've read in a while.
| jayflower chapter 10 . 7/13/2013
Aww, its been so cute 'watching' him grow up in this story. You've hit quite a few points that he was bound to encounter as he grew up and it was nice to see how he resolved his internal issues. I almost didn't read this but was definitely glad I gave it a chance; I personally think you should perhaps change the summary that readers view in the search, it's disappointing that this story isn't more popular and if you changed that I believe you'll get more viewers. And even if that isn't your goal, the readers find a previously undiscovered treasure. I really think that too many are missing out on this well-written story. But anyway, was a pleasure to read & thanks for sharing
| The Hazel Purple Skyline chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Dunno if anyone told you this already, but the several "wondering around the castle" should be "wandering around the castle".
I like the story, and I think you are perfectly portraying Teddy as a lost child who is looking for something- but he cannot quite put his finger on it.
| hemmingstyles chapter 10 . 4/1/2012
I loved every single one of these drabbles. You made it sound as if you actually went through everything Teddy was thinking which made it even better. (For all I know, maybe you have) But to write about death like that, that was amazing. People who haven't faced death don't know how it feels but you depicted it perfectly (I would hurts like hell.)
Keep writing! I love all the stories I've read that's by you!
| Fictional History chapter 10 . 8/31/2011
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 10 . 1/29/2011
Ahh, Victoire and Teddy! I love those two, and I love them in this chapter too. It's so great that you always connect the flashbacks to the present time
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 9 . 1/29/2011
I think your parental chapters are the ones that make me start to cry. The scene between Tonks and Teddy was just amazing!
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 8 . 1/29/2011
I love Victoire's conclusion of Teddy's actions! This chapter was hilarious!
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 7 . 1/29/2011
I find it's so great that Teddy's learning all of these meaningful life lessons with just the help of his surrogate families and his friends.
Another well written chapter :D
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 6 . 1/29/2011
McGonagall's reaction to Marauders and Andromeda's last line was amusing! And I'm assuming their pranks will only improve as the years go by? :)
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 5 . 1/29/2011
Your OC's have been pretty well developed, and I love the ending of this chapter - especially the last two lines. :)
| PrincessLazyPants chapter 4 . 1/29/2011
So far, I like this chapter the most - I think...the chapters have been really great so far. I thought that Teddy had found something that he could use as a connection with his father and uncles. The bit about Peeves was really nice too...he was in character, but still sensible enough around Teddy!