Reviews for While You Were Sleeping
Jocelyn bee chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
my character has blue optics she is a femme and her size is mini 1rst she is a sparkling 2th youngling tot / teen but her age is 15 she is a scout and she has doorwings she can talk she so cute and if starscram trys taking nara away from her family her dad might hurt him badly because starscream BAD and he will might start running away from the atubots but starscream still taking nara but don't have luck
SoulBeeGirl chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
haha i dont know if you will continue this but i hope you will :)
Bumblebee son of Optimus chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
LMAO! I was so totaly Bumblebee when I was younger! I managed to kick my dad in the nose (I have no idea how) And push him out of the bed! I think in the end he just slept in the living room! XD Good job! This was sooo funny, and soooooooo cute! :D
Trapezoidal chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
Cheerful, aren't they?
imaginethat96 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Creative Lunatic chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
aww so adorable/cute! i love this! i love YOU! you're so funny :3
Majorkami chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
"How's a 5-second head start sound to you?"


Thanks for the nice bit of fun!
BoredTech chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
ROTFLMAO! I laughed so loud I woke up the kids! I was totally Bee as a kid, I even kicked my own grandmother out of bed at one point lol:)
OrianPrime92 chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Git'm Ratchet! Git'm!

As much as I love Ratchet and the Adema song, etc, I have a baby brother that was FINALLY bed-trained at...10, I think. Maybe 9 or 8. -_- If he wasn't in Mom and Dad's bed... he was in MINE... And he... Sleeps like... Bumblebee... -twitches- except he doesnt need a nightmare...

Granted, I kick sometimes too, but my brother ends up ON TOP OF THE OTHER PERSON!


He's been bed-trained for 3 years...
Quantum01 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
.god!I laughed my pants off with this one, especially with the kicking and stuff!

Brilliant!Do more of these please!
roo17 chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
lol! poor ratchet. run bee!
Fantasyfan4ever chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Hehe, another fantastic fic! Aww, I give kudos to Ratchet for being so pacient; I hope that he doesn't tormed Bee too much. XD Excellent job with characterization!
shimmershadow30 chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
hahaahhahaahahahahahahaha the Twins gave bb good advice for such an early time in the morning hahahaha
Sotwt Icehail chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Poor Bee. XD
SyntheticEuph0ria chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
The Twins at the end just made this all the better. XD
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