Reviews for Bad Doggie!
NewStar16 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
ahh write more it was getting goog and i hate cliffhanger endings.
IAmInMyOwnLittleWorld chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Please go on lol, it sounds funny!
capricorn2645 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
haha cant wait for next chapter!
Rithralinde chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
do we have to wait for eight?

didn't mean to rhyme, good job so far, it's a bit rushed though.

I'll be watching.
MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Things I liked:

I like the beginning and what it explains about Hatori and Shigure's relationship

Yay it's a Mabu trio fic

The ending is pretty comedic

Ways to improve:

Balance verbal communication with nonverbal and description

Work on characterization a little

~Myst

Things that I didn't like:

It's a bit fast paced
littlefiction chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Squee! I have got to check my email more often! To think this has been sitting here without my knowledge for three days! I love how Tori struggles and struggles, calls and hangs up! You can just see the cogs turning in his brain! Woohoo! Thank you for writing this, I look forward to the next chapter!
loretta537 chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
poor hatori, i wonder what will happen to him.