|Reviews for Bad Doggie!|
| NewStar16 chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
ahh write more it was getting goog and i hate cliffhanger endings.
| IAmInMyOwnLittleWorld chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Please go on lol, it sounds funny!
| capricorn2645 chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
haha cant wait for next chapter!
| Rithralinde chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
do we have to wait for eight?
didn't mean to rhyme, good job so far, it's a bit rushed though.
I'll be watching.
| MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Things I liked:
I like the beginning and what it explains about Hatori and Shigure's relationship
Yay it's a Mabu trio fic
The ending is pretty comedic
Ways to improve:
Balance verbal communication with nonverbal and description
Work on characterization a little
Things that I didn't like:
It's a bit fast paced
| littlefiction chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Squee! I have got to check my email more often! To think this has been sitting here without my knowledge for three days! I love how Tori struggles and struggles, calls and hangs up! You can just see the cogs turning in his brain! Woohoo! Thank you for writing this, I look forward to the next chapter!
| loretta537 chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
poor hatori, i wonder what will happen to him.