|Reviews for Delta One|
| cuteangel4eva chapter 31 . 11/5/2012
Wait so what's up with the message? Why did Ash read it again? Is she going to do something about it? fight the firm or join em' ? either one is a lunatic decision. Anyhow it's been a long journey reading this story lol so thanks, you had me at Ash's bad ass moves, and death, and of course the Spashley lovin :)
| cuteangel4eva chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
ahh bad ass Ashely this story somewhat reminds me of one of my fave fan fics called, "I Died so I Could Haunt You"
| River.R chapter 2 . 4/6/2011
seriously: no no no no PLL. yes yes YES YES D.O.2! :)
| River.R chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I spent the day reading this...again :)
I just can't help it! I decided to read a chapter cuz I had an idea for the soundtrack and then I got into it all over again. I don't think I'll ever get tired of Delta One. It's really really good!
I hope you write the sequel some day. One day *shrug* who knows...?
Doesn't hurt to dream...
| imaferrari chapter 31 . 7/11/2010
Great story! There really could be a sequel...
Now, it looks like you've started another story, so I'll read that next.
| imaferrari chapter 27 . 7/11/2010
I am ASSUMING this is all part of Ashley's brilliant, genius, insane plan...
| imaferrari chapter 25 . 7/11/2010
One of the funniest lines ever:
"You were spying on me?"
"No!" Ashley stood up. "I was walking from Remi's pawn shop when, through the magical invention of the window, I saw you two."
HA! Through the magical invention of the window - cracked me up!
Ugh, and Kennedy. Bitch.
| imaferrari chapter 23 . 7/11/2010
Oh, shit. Abe, I bet.
| imaferrari chapter 21 . 7/11/2010
Serious action here. Ashley is beyond a tough bad-ass. Funny, when I read the "Wakey,wakey" part said by the voice of a woman, I couldn't help but wonder if Kennedy is somehow involved in all this. I mean, how did she have that FBI clearance? I know I'm probably WAY off base, but I thought it before and when I thought of this woman being a bad guy, it brought my mind back to Kennedy. Maybe her law firm or her practice is like "The Firm" and work for the mafia. She just seemed so fishy. Hmm.
Ok, back to your story...:)
| imaferrari chapter 20 . 7/11/2010
| imaferrari chapter 9 . 7/11/2010
Ok, so I know I'm out of order here, but since I've started posting, I thought I should go back and comment on chapter 9, which was SO GOOD. The last half was so full of love and so very bittersweet. Pulls at the heartstrings. I'm going to get on with my reading now...
| imaferrari chapter 12 . 7/11/2010
You know, I really do hope that somewhere in this story Ashley explains this to Spencer. She commented earlier that they got her "literally" right after they broke up. I just hope that she explains later that it was because she and her loved ones were threated with death. I want Spencer to understand that Ashley did not leave their life willingly. Ugh. I guess I'll find out soon enough.
| imaferrari chapter 10 . 7/11/2010
I've had this story bookmarked for a while, but wanted to have a whole weekend to be able to read the whole thing. I could not wait to the end to review, however, because this chapter was just too impactful. My chest felt heavy and I had tears in my eyes at the end. (Probably doesn't help that I've had one of those goodbyes, except I was looking through tears in a rear view mirror, not a peephole.) Wow, though. You really pulled out the emotion in this one.
| bitten2 chapter 31 . 4/7/2010
awesome story! you should do a sequal!
| Ashley Evening chapter 31 . 10/27/2009
it was good to read and interesting, fairy tale-y but really entertaining. with some god twists and details.