Reviews for Moving Past the Pain
Betz88 chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Aha ... you got me.
One tiny clue stuck in my mind, but I couldn't figure out how to do anything with it. "Newspaper route ... new set of wheels ..."
Nice camouflage, nice choice of words. You painted a picture in my head that I didn't know what to do with.
Stories like these really get to me.
As our friend Greg would say: "niiiice ..."
lucretiafly chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
oouf. nice punchy last line, puts the whole thing into perspective. very very nicely done.
lilawonder chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Nice plot twist! I love it!
Amethyst DragonRider chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
Aww, poor Wilson. D

Are his legs paralized?

Oh, and, you made a couple of mistakes by the way:

“Wakey, wakey, Wilson. Did you break your personal best coming into work today?” What are you going to do with all the money you save from your newspaper route? Buy a new set of wheels?”

You should prolly take out the extra ".

And, here:

“House, it’s not your liver, that bothers me. Wilson blushes with shame, It’s . . . I can’t get past my jealousy of your pain.”

On that one, you should add two "". )
kwittbugginme chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
WHOA! I so did not see that coming... please continue, maybe tell us how it happened...

Ocaso chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
O, when did this happen?

Great story; believable. Keep posting.


Ashily chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
I liked this. (:

It was really interesting to see Wilson as the one with the mobility problems, as opposed to House. Its very fresh.

Keep going with this! :D

It would brighten my life.