Reviews for Fukakoi
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Good story but a lot a lot of mistakes. Get a beta reader perhaps?
Taiyoukousen-sama chapter 1 . 3/9/2011
i so awwwwwwwwwed at the end lol loved it. sweet. fav
Yaoi-Doctor chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
HOLY SHIT! FUCKING SWEET SO CUTE! THAT WAS SO AWESOME SO SEXY SO JUST DAMN! LOLZ SAKURAS A SLUT LOVE THIS STORY KEEP IT UP xP
LovingTheLemonsOfLife chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I couldn't finish the story the grammar was so bad. Find yourself a good beta before you decide to create any more stories...
EP Darkside chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
this was THE best sasodei fanfic i have ever read.
Stormwolf3x chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
This was awesome :)! the part with Hidan was sad though, xD but happy ending, woot! other then a few spelling errors, which everyone does, this was great, keep writing :D
black55widow chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
This is a good story but you need a beta to help a little bit..
Takoto chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Good story, but you should have spaced out the bigger paragraphs, it was a little hard too read. Also, you should proof-read it for grammar and spelling mistakes. Also (sorry too go on and on!) there was a lot of "/i" and "i"'s around randomly, i guess you where trying too make the writing Italic. On the top of the document panel thingy, theres B, I, and U. The bits you want too be Italic, highlight them and click the "I" I'll make it Italic and you wont have to use HTML codes (which don't work on here). But anyway, the story was a pretty good story (: *adds it too favorites*