I enjoyed the premise, and I could see Duzell doing this-turning Ishtar while his vampires invade-but I don't see him lying to Ishtar. Remember, he doesn't understand human emotions like guilt and remorse. He has no reason to lie to her here and make her believe she did it. So your ending was unbelievable to me.

Nothing compares to its glory!

this was awesome! i loved it! it was very cute!_!

I thought it was good at first but it was a little pushy and it doesn't seem like something that would happen, but other than that it was very good... were you rushed to finish it? Cause it sorta seemed like it.

HEll ! this is what shoulda happened in the first place!

AW so CUTE~! -

:D awesome!

SEQUEL!

well, to tell you the truth i wasn't really impressed.

Write another one please! You are very good at doing these stories!

This is really good! I love Duzie and Ishtar!_

"The last time I was extremelt bored, I set out to kill the human race. maybe..."

hehe. Amazing how Ishtar's boredom can escalate into a vampire attack.

And it is believable, since Duzell has to be a vampire king and take over stuff, but wanted to save Ishtar.

good job!