Reviews for A New Chance Continued |
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Jestrbob chapter 16 . 10/10/2024 wow. 2013 nice story begs to be finished. Did you post it someplace else? |
tonyalambert75 chapter 7 . 3/24/2024 I am still reading through your story, but I really like it so far. I would really like more development, though with snape he needs to see through Harry and James into Harry is himself. I’ve always liked it with Snape turns out to be actually sour, but good. I’d like to see someone help kids like Draco in your story. Maybe help him get away from a bad situation. He’s in and show him what it’s good to be friends with people that are going to be true friends I always kind of like to good Malfroy stories. |
perlcat45 chapter 16 . 3/12/2024 Great story. I enjoy your harry. |
Slytherin Uzumaki chapter 1 . 2/12/2024 Why is Harry a masochistic piece of shit? Harry should have used his magic and slaughtered the Dursley bastard the moment he hit him. |
Jimbocous chapter 16 . 1/6/2024 Thanks for a really great read so far! The way you've constructed the whole Dursley scenario is, as far as I know, totally unique and very interesting. Sure hope you find your way back to this, as real life permits! |
Reborn A Phoenix chapter 13 . 9/29/2023 It was a good story overall so far, but you need to get your facts checked, every few paragraphs there are so called facts and mentions of stuff that happened that contradict something that was said in earlier chapters, like Hermione alwats stopping by to check up on him to her being so focused on research she forgot Harry and even that now she was dead even before she left. |
BrewstrMcl chapter 15 . 8/26/2023 Fairly typical for this site. The author claims that he/she will be putting out more chapters in the near future and then 10 years go by? I guess real life gets in the way of a hobby but it still amazes me that so many authors swear up and down the they will continue their stories and then just up and disappear. Oh well, what is here is well written and probably worth an idle Saturday afternoon read. |
Witchy Jessikah chapter 1 . 8/21/2023 I really tried to. Give it a chance i read the first 10 chapers posted and by that i mean i ppushed next ten times and its still awful one of the worst potter going back storylines ive read |
bramscan92 chapter 16 . 7/31/2023 I don't know what to say, it's great story but hard to connect with harry since he is sound pretty op with everything.. Well he come back from future so it's make sense.. |
csheila chapter 15 . 7/24/2023 What a fantastic idea about someone else messing with Harry’s life. Umbitch and Malfoy would kill him. Snape might get a kick out of bullying Harry but he always seem surprised. Maybe another Marauders bully victim or someone who wanted to marry James |
csheila chapter 13 . 7/24/2023 That person harassing you was a stalker. I hope you blocked them |
csheila chapter 11 . 7/24/2023 This was an exceptionally good chapter. You know and understand these characters. I am sorry things got so tough. That was a terrible recession |
JeanPaulVS chapter 16 . 5/9/2023 Lastima que termino... Con esperanza que terminen de escribir esta historia. Fue lenta y algo aburrida al inicio pero luego me gusto. Gracias. |
Mando-Vet chapter 16 . 5/7/2023 A very entertaining story. |
csheila chapter 16 . 4/22/2023 Such a wonderful story. I wish you could have taken it further but what you gave us was great. I hope you didn’t give up on your writing. You have a gift for voices, by this I mean characters |