Reviews for Affinity
Crystalzap chapter 10 . 11/6/2016
lol great ending and great story! i almost didn't read it when it said Naruto would be giving up the child, but I'm glad I did it was really worth the read. Setsuna was a really great OC too, a perfect mix of Naruto and Sasuke
nothingbutadaydream chapter 10 . 9/5/2016
oh wow I love this story
Shikome chapter 10 . 7/26/2016
Oh shit I love this!
Fi Suki Saki chapter 10 . 4/11/2016
Setsuna get a sister! XD


This fic is different from other SN mpreg fic!
Because Naruto was pregnant at 13 years old which i thought no one would dare to make one! (i actually have small intention to make one if i could write the plot)
And he wasn't there to raise him for 13 years too.

I'm glad their family resolved and growing now.

I lOVE it!
Guest chapter 10 . 1/24/2016
Fuuuuuuuuuuck that made me cry awesome fic dude
TezuSezu chapter 10 . 6/2/2015
ive read this whole ten chapter long in 3 hours .. and what i can say is ...
... .
... im in love .
please do write more sasunaru fics .. ur expert expecting no less from you .. ur amazing author and u know it _ id live to welcoming more of your masterpiece in near future _

actually, i have a say in mistyping (?) ... err .. theres a phrase that said, ' loose' when it should be 'lose/losing' .. 'loose' is kinda similiar with a extended rope or something as close as it .. #my grammar is suck,but i my eyes is kinda sharp on critizing .. dont mad at me .. i know am an ass :p
sorry for pointng it out, though . it cant be helped that i like this fic too much ... _

by all means, thank you for writing such an amazing story .. _
Amora.Lee chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
I wanna cry the same thing was done for Naruto's own good and he got screwed by it all
mirian chapter 10 . 7/20/2014
has una secuela por favor
Theh0spitalfors0uls chapter 3 . 6/16/2014
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jayriri chapter 10 . 5/4/2014
Ninaloveanime chapter 10 . 3/31/2014
really nice, thank you :)
Petite louve chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
Hello Akiru chan,

I like your story, Naruto hasn't lucky but I hope for him that will go good in the futur. Thank for your story.

Petite louve

Just sorry if my review isn't correct I'm not good speak english.
MissLittleNeko chapter 10 . 1/13/2014
i think this might be too late but i have to say that i really like your story. i like the story from beginning to the end and i like setsuna name. from my experience, this name was way better than any other name i read before. i can imagined him a mix of naruto and sasuke clearly and his nickname are so cute! one more thing, i love how you potraited sakura's character in this story. i dont like sakura bashing, i feel that its not fair for sakura. she's a nice girl and great shinobi and i really like her but the truth is i love sasunaru more. hohohoho...
so, well done for completely this story. its simple but im very satisfied. keep up for other stories.
jj chapter 10 . 6/23/2013
very nice
Hopeless Mitsuki chapter 10 . 6/3/2013
I liked the way you discribed each naruto and Sasuke's feeling. The beginning of this story, the 3 first chapters i think, just made me cry à river, it was so sad, i had so many feelings ! Thxs !
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