|Reviews for Sweet Competition|
| StyxxsOmega chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
omg really good and funny. please write more.
| Fenrir16 chapter 2 . 7/21/2011
Hahahah, omg I just love to read about their fight for Cloud XD hahah. Oh, you gotta continue :P
| fivebutts chapter 2 . 1/5/2010
I hope Zack wins! This is a funny story!
| CloudFairFF7 chapter 2 . 12/28/2009
i want zack to win!
| pamellka chapter 2 . 12/14/2009
| seemslikeaporno chapter 2 . 7/19/2009
This is amazingg. I love it. Lots and lots. xD
Favoriting, 'cause that's how I roll ;D
| BritishSarcasm chapter 2 . 2/21/2009
Aw i hope you've gotten better
hehe, i like this story and the idea of them fighting over Cloud, who doesn't seem interested in either of them.
please update soon.
| shongnom chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
ahaha omg im likin this
| Kwahzutah chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
LOL, Zack persistantly says their a couple! This is hilarious, keep it up!
| Sarcism chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
I really like your plot so far(mainly cuz I like crack xD). But I think you should watch your grammar and punctuation. For grammar, it's not really that serious and can be overlooked, but you should still pay attention to it(who's should be whose, for example). For your punctuation... hmm.
For one, you should stop using so many '?'; it can be used once in a while, but too much would throw off the readers. It's good for comics and the like, but not so good for proper, written stories. Put a space after every ellipsis in order to improve on the flow. Cut down on the successive repetition of punctuation marks; it also throws off your readers.
That's about it for the moment. Minor errors, really. Good work. :)
| Shirosenshi Kisetsu 116 chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
xD! That whole chapter had me laughing my ass off! That was great, I cant wait until you post the next chapter 0
| Whitefleur chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
ahaha.. thsi fic is hilarious. Gotta love it.
| Kards chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Your FF is great. I love the way you describe Cloud, fits him very well. And also like the triangle between these three.
Hope next chapter will come soon!
| Junichi chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
Yay pissed Zack! xD Reno is just adorable here :3 Please update soon! _
| Shirosenshi Kisetsu 116 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
xD I can't wait for the madness to continue! -waits for the next chapter-