Reviews for Trembling Air
humble beginnings chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
I'm speechless.

Gah. That was beautiful, but sad indeed. :(
Quiet Moon chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
-quiet applause- Very well done, NessieGG-san. The last line of this was a very good ender. It just closed this up with a sense of haunting, one that just puts foreboding into you, but with its circumstances, just a calm acceptance as well. Yeah...it's really something that makes you think, 'what if'. It really does make you think of all the possibilities of one little action that can completely change the tide of events. It doesn't quite make me sad, but more...contemplative, I suppose. Dark elements tend to do that to me, I suppose.
RofS chapter 1 . 5/1/2008
Wow, this is beautiful! Its not actually that dark, I think, but its hardly happy, so perhaps you are justified in saying that it is a dark fic. It was a little slower than I think your fics usually are, which made it a little more difficult for me to pay attention, but I think it was a little bit sweet and a little bit good, and rather pretty. Good job!

(Oh, and, by the way - first reviewer!)
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