Reviews for In His Shoes
cake chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
JAKEBELLALOVE

:D
Kari Twilight Mist chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
OK that was BY FAR the best rendition I have seen done! It was written well enough that is COULD have been SM's. It also helped me understand the conversation because I had a lot of trouble getting it in the book since all of the backstory was missing. So I am really glad I found this. Good job.
THPL chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
aww this is so sweet. this is my fave chapter in eclipse :D

i love Jake and Edward. i still cant decide!
Softfrost chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Wow. You got Jacob's POV a tenfold better than me, it was just amazingly Jacoby, especially what he thought at the beginning. Again, wow. :)
oXXb00kw0rmXXo chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Oh wow, I like it! You're an Edward fan, huh? You portrayed Jake really greatly! I loved it, absolutely loved it. You didn't bash either side and I think you really got into his head... or his shoes, either one. Did you check out Being Jacob Black on SM's website? Just curious!
luv2beloved chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
I thought that you did a great job, makes me wnat to get Eclipse out and read! My favorite part is what comes up next, the fight
Panda513 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Awesome story!

I love getting inside Jacob's head, especially in this scene.. it was so intense. I am such a big Jacob-lover too.

You did a great job, hope to see more stories from you soon!

-Amanda
Apple Slushie chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Aw this is great!

I found this story really sweet. Seeing the other side of the story...

Well thanks for that, it was really wonderful and sad :(

Great writing, hardly any mistakes. great idea