Reviews for The Funeral
OreoFudge'D chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
Crying - I love your fic! Gaah~
Laurel chapter 1 . 5/2/2009
I started crying.

Normally, I disassociate myself from characters in fanfiction, only really empathizing with few. But this...

I have to go read Breaking Dawn now to remind myself that it really turned out okay.
sunfire04 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
That was a really nice story :)
CrazyFanfictionAuthor chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
This was really good. And sad...
The Novelist in Training chapter 1 . 4/4/2009 i don't know what else to say, but now i'm kinda sad, oh well, that's what a good story can do to you :D
Vampiregirl345 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
the story was so sad

and an great story
sintRizzie chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
so sad but sweet(L)
EmmyBoo chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
oh my gosh, this is one of the best au stories i've read in awhile! i discovered you on pel's site, and was thrilled to see you had a bigger profile here. it's clear you are very talented, and i hope to see more from you in the future.
AnotherStupidLamb chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Wow, that was depressing, yet entirely honest. I'm team Jacob, yet not at the same time. I'm all for these alternative endings and this was probably the best AE I've read. It was truthful to both sides of the spectrum. I do believe that if Renesme hadn't been born, then only Bella's death could bring Edward and Jacob together, and in ways that I never really wanted to explore.

Thank you for writing this. It was beautiful and touching and I appreciate the sentiment that Bella is to both Jacob and Edward at the end. A symbol of commitment and also indecision.

Really great one-shot.


(Btw, you should check out my story Don't Apologize. It's about Edward being rejected by Bella after New Moon. It's kinda depressing in itself.)
dsolo chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
This is so sad. Very well done.
bakallone chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
shit, my eyes are all stingy. thats so sad. [
xO Beautiful Mind Ox chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
awawaw so sad!

but so good!
LolaluvsEdward chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
OMG! That was so sad! But I loved it! (I'm really hoping my dad doesn't come into my room, 'cause I'm crying and they are all red)

Amazing! :)
Just-Lynn-10310 chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
Moreadhiel Seregdagnir chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
I almost started crying. I'm Team Edward all the way and I always will be so this hard for me to read all the way.
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